Date: January 04, 2007 09:09 am Title: Chapter 1
Go Phyllis. YES! Now if Pam will heed that advice. Can't wait for your next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm working on the next chapter now, hopefully I won't ge too distracted by other things (read: video games) to finish soon!
Date: January 03, 2007 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
ooh, weekend declaration maybe and Jim not knowing how to react?? and then him "deciding" on Monday with Phyllis cheering on?? Anyway, great story! :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the suggestions!
Date: January 03, 2007 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Phyllis is one of my favorites, so I was glad to see this story! I'm excited to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks! Phyllis is one of my favorites as well!
Date: January 03, 2007 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
Go Phyllis! Cannot WAIT to see what you bring us next! Someone does need to (gently) bitch-slap that girl into smelling the coffee!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!!
Date: January 03, 2007 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
One other thing.... you know, it would be interesting if this story had a double-meaning, like, for instance, not only is it Phyllis taking a stand against Karen, but also maybe Phyllis taking a stand for herself. After seeing the way that she was treated in ABC, I think that might be an interesting side-plot to explore if you wanted.
Author's Response: Ooh, thank you for that! I'll have to see if I could work that in somehow. Thank you!!
Date: January 03, 2007 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Phyllis is one of my favorite characters, and I loved her take-charge attitude with Pam at Pam's desk. The only question I have is, how did Phyllis get to see the kiss between them? I understand from the story that she saw it on video, but why did Phyllis see it and not Pam? I'm just curious about the backstory behind that comment. Sorry -- just a stickler for details... I love knowing about little stuff like that.
You've got an interesting start...
Author's Response:
Hmm. I was assuming that no one has seen the video footage yet at all, and Phyllis just had because of the bribe.
Thank you, though!
Date: January 03, 2007 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
Cuuuute! Phyllis would totally take charge. Can't wait to see more!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!