Date: January 06, 2007 06:30 pm Title: Good morning. Lunch? Not so much.
It's good so far. Hurry up and finish!
Date: January 06, 2007 05:48 am Title: Good morning. Lunch? Not so much.
I really like this - looking forward to reading some more!
Date: January 05, 2007 10:11 pm Title: Good morning. Lunch? Not so much.
i really like this so far, and the tense seemed good throughout. please continue!
Date: January 05, 2007 08:13 pm Title: Good morning. Lunch? Not so much.
Hmmm, I much prefer third person, past tense stories to first person, present tense. I just can't read them for some reason.
Author's Response:
I know, it's very different :] I really just wanted to give it a go. Thanks for taking the time to read it and commenting!
Date: January 05, 2007 06:51 pm Title: Good morning. Lunch? Not so much.
Writing in the first person is a very tough thing to do, but so far I think you're doing well. I'll look forward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for commenting! I agree, writing in first person is VERY tough but I wanted to give it a try. My main purpose of this fic was for the reader to feel like Pam. Feel her emotions...and lets not forget..how it would feel to be with Jim.. :] Wouldn't that be nice? heh. Well thank you again for commenting!
Date: January 05, 2007 06:01 pm Title: Good morning. Lunch? Not so much.
Oh that was good...I really liked the last sentence...Of course he noticed...
janet
Author's Response: You would be surprised with how many alternatives I had just for that last part. And thank you so much for commenting :]