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Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2007 02:18 am Title: Tuesday the 16th

LOVE long chapters, love your story. It's really beautiful, I'm not much of a reviewer but I really love it

Reviewer: Eppy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 14, 2007 10:24 pm Title: Tuesday the 16th

Do not apologize for a long chapter! I love them!!!  i am eagerly awaiting the next installment, the story is beautiful!

Reviewer: Amy Anonymous 9 [Report This]
Date: January 14, 2007 09:59 pm Title: Tuesday the 16th

I don't think that this chapter was too long! I  thought it was really good! I hope you add another soon!

Reviewer: shan21 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14, 2007 09:47 pm Title: Tuesday the 16th

Don't ever apologize for long chapters. I live for long chapters. They're the best kind! Especially with a story as fun to read as yours!

Reviewer: PuffingNoise Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: January 14, 2007 08:49 pm Title: Tuesday the 16th

Great chapter! I'm looking forward to the next!

One thing: the part that takes place in the store, "isle" should be "aisle"

Reviewer: agd300 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14, 2007 07:48 pm Title: Office Intermission

You're going to update soon, right?

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2007 06:11 am Title: Office Intermission

Great chapter and I like how Jim had the balled up piece of paper in his hands.

Reviewer: darklypotter Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10, 2007 07:45 pm Title: Office Intermission

OMG! I loved "She paused to say good morning to Jim, even if it was only his yearbook picture" That was perfect and I laughed out loud like I was crazy b/c I could totally see myself doing that.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10, 2007 07:10 pm Title: Office Intermission

oooh, promising!  Jim noticing the FNB hair!  And dumping Karen -- bonus!  Cannot wait to see what comes next!

Reviewer: SixFlightsUp Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 08:06 am Title: Monday the 15th

I'm... I guess thirding the 'I thought Jim was in her bedroom' comment. Wishful thinking much? I'm really looking forward to seeing where this goes. Also, can't help but mention how much I love a good 'sure. fine. whatever.' insert:-)

Reviewer: kaystar Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08, 2007 04:35 pm Title: Monday the 15th

Interesting the way Darryl brought up the break-up/Jim leaving connection.  Poor Roy. I was afraid for a minute that Roy would be more confrontational with Pam and was glad to see you didn't have that happen.  And poor sad Pam. Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 08, 2007 04:11 pm Title: Monday the 15th

haha - I was thinking exactly the same think lisahoo was - I kept hoping that Jim was there when Roy showed up....

Where's the next chapter?? 

Reviewer: Rayne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 08, 2007 02:36 pm Title: Monday the 15th

Wow.. you actually made me feel sorry for Roy. Shame on you!

I'm glad you finally posted a fic! : ) Next one needs to be MA though.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08, 2007 11:18 am Title: Monday the 15th

Is it wrong of me to have wanted Pam to be so insistent that Roy leave because she had Jim back in her bedroom?  I know, wishful thinking.

Crying!Pam in BfV has just unleashed a torrent of heartache in fanfic, hasn't she?   Can't wait to see where this leads, both here in your story & on the show.

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