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Reviewer: Night Swept Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2007 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is awesome.  The parallel real/imagined story is skillfully done, and you're light and dark images are all very strong.  You should write more!

 

Reviewer: lano Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 08, 2007 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

There's a real quality to this that makes you feel almost drunk when you're reading it, if that makes sense?  Jim's drunken depression was palpable.

Reviewer: Kath Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 08, 2007 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

Dark and painful...which I imagine is what you were going for.  Nicely done.

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