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Reviewer: kaystar Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 2

"But in that minute, when she was being brushed aside as inconsequential to the love story that seemed to be unfolding in front of them all, she wished that he knew she had some claim to the situation" - I absolutely loved this line. Poor Karen is truly a victim here and I can't help but feel sad for her.  Can't wait to see what drunk Roy is up to!

Author's Response: Yeah... I've been trying so hard to hate Karen and I just can't get there... It's really sad that no one's told her what she's getting in the middle of. Poor thing has no idea! Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: Nestani Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 2

Hot damn! The documentary actually airing? Drunk Roy? I'm totally digging this fic...keep it going!

Reviewer: Beth Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 2

oh, my god, i love this story! I cannot wait until the next chapter. this is the only fic i every read where i feel really anxious to read the next chapter.....please dont make me wait too long. :)

Author's Response: That means so much to me! Thank you! I'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: shaebay Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 2

you have to continue right away!

Reviewer: dapixam_q Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 06:33 am Title: Chapter 2

No. 1: thank you! for having the documentary air because that never happens and I love it.

No. 2: Michael is perfect. Good job!

No. 3: This is great. Can't wait for more. 



Author's Response: I'm blushing over here! Thank you so much! I can't tell you how much that means to me!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2007 06:26 am Title: Chapter 2

can't wait for the next chapter to see drunk Roy.

Author's Response: I'll try my best not to make you wait too long!

Reviewer: neptune1 Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 08, 2007 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 2

Ooh, cliffhanger!  I like where you're going with this.  I'd like to see some more outright interaction between Karen and Jim at this point in addition to the Pam/Jim interaction.  I don't think Jim should get off too easy, you know?  You've done a great job capturing Michael's general cluelessness and do-gooder attitude.  Can't wait to see what comes next.

Author's Response: There should be some Jim/Karen interaction, but I don't know how much. The next chapter is really the scene that stuck itself in my head and made me write this story... So you'll just have to wait and see where it's going;-) But thanks about the Michael characterization! I was worried that I was almost going overboard with him... til I remembered that that's not exactly possible...

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08, 2007 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 2

Cannot wait to see where this will lead!  And I have been curious about the 'documentary' airing too -- so many possibilities!!!


Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yeah, there's just something about the "universe" almost like folding back on itself when that (documentary airing) happens. Very cool to think about!

Reviewer: Kath Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 08, 2007 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 2

Oh now that is just cruel!!  Can't wait for more :)

Author's Response: Ha, sorry! But thank you so much! I'm so glad you like it!

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