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Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2018 04:08 pm Title: Revelations

I really wish this was finished. It's such. A. Cliffhanger. And at a point that I don't think is quite emotionally justified (they really need to learn to talk to each other before making decisions) so I wish I could know how it would work out.

Reviewer: BecauseOfYou Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2018 09:05 pm Title: No Suprise Please

Ahhhh... finish this!!

Reviewer: Pyrofanity Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2011 10:10 am Title: No Suprise Please

please write more! I know its been years but this cliffhanger is killing me.

Reviewer: cri-man-squa Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 29, 2008 07:18 pm Title: No Suprise Please

Didn't you finish this yet??? :P You really should post more soon. Such a dork...

Reviewer: Noodles Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2008 10:38 am Title: Revelations

hey. Just came across this stroy. Any chance it's going to be updated? It's really good!

Author's Response: Yes it will be updated - I'm on a writing kick, so keep looking out!  Glad you like!  :) Thank you!

Reviewer: BeckySue Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: November 14, 2007 09:01 pm Title: No Suprise Please

Wow....very well done. I love it. I know what happens in the next chapter...that's why it makes this chapter so muc harder to read...gah, you break my heart Nicole. Gah...

Author's Response:

why thanks m'dear, trust me without you and EH it'd have been a lot worse.  So yay you! :D

 Oh, and *spoiler alert* someone's already read the next chapter...... :)  Thanks for all your lovely help Becky, you are too amazing for words.

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14, 2007 07:56 am Title: The Merger

moulin rouge is awesome.

and mtt hates me. 

Author's Response:

yes MR is a-may-zing.

 That is all. 

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14, 2007 07:08 am Title: Vacation

before the roy phone call this chapter reminded me of moneyin a way. and that made me happy  

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14, 2007 07:04 am Title: Impossible to Ignore

Oh yeah, Honey Nut Cheerios. Breakfast of champions!


Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14, 2007 06:37 am Title: Telling the Truth

ha! I did read this. I just didn't remembr. so, i must play catch up!

I am doing shorter reviews right now, but a few things:
casual!Pam is awesome Pam.

and you make mention of expired yogurt, which of course meant nothing, but now brings memories of the second roof date.

Off to read more.

Author's Response:

Well glad you liked it ms. emily! :D

All!Pams are Awesome!Pams soooooo your eally can't lose.  Except WithRoy!Pam.  Then we all lose.  But tha'ts not important.

and I didn't even realize the whole expired yogurt thing! (it's been a while sicne i've read these chapters) 

Thanks for a short Emily review!!! :D  I love 'em

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03, 2007 02:02 pm Title: The Merger

i love that jim left little post it notes. so cute.

write more. no more SADD for you :P 

Author's Response:

well you know, I do love me some post it notes. Err.....

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2007 06:11 pm Title: The Merger

Whew! I thought for sure that Karen saying she liked Jim and then following Jim when he left the office was going to be bad news. Yay for you that it wasn't.  I love Jim leaving the post-its all over the house.  So sweet.

Reviewer: KittyCat Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2007 09:40 pm Title: The Merger

What a sweet story! I gotta ask is the Karen/Roy situation completely resolved doesn't seem like it

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 01:15 pm Title: The Merger

Very nice.  I like the Post-its.  ...and that Jim was never with Karen!!!

Author's Response: Thanks TooLateKev!  And doesn't it just seem easier to never have Karen.... ever?  At all? I think so.  But some people seem to think otherwise *cough*writers*cough*  ;) Anyhoo, thanks, I'm glad you liked it!!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2007 11:56 am Title: The Merger

Ooh, I was wondering how you were going to handle Karen (that killjoy!) and the Merger.  And the post-its definitely make up for the angst! 

It all makes so much sense in your story -- why can't GD figure this out?  Pam and Jim belong together.  Making popcorn, watching movies, everything.  

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm so glad you liked it!  More will be coming soon!

Reviewer: Beth Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 18, 2007 12:06 pm Title: Resolutions

That was the sweetest!  I loved all Jim's family cheering them on after the kiss!  I can't wait to see what comes next.

Reviewer: BeckySue Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2007 09:53 pm Title: Vacation

Keep up the good work. I love this story....We need more!


Reviewer: super_perfect Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 04, 2007 11:18 pm Title: Vacation

Wow. I did NOT expect that. Someday these two will learn to communicate well, especially Jim. Til then, ugh. Jim!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04, 2007 09:33 am Title: Vacation

it was going so wonderfully and then roy had to call. trying to decide if jim overreacted or not... hum, still don't know.

i think i read this story way out of order, the last half and then the first half, and then this chapter... i dunno how or why. but, still good. continue please!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04, 2007 08:55 am Title: Keeping (Some) Secrets

haha, i am reading this, but ijust had to laugh at michael's if you love them set them free.... i better make ure jim has my number bit

Reviewer: kells8995 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04, 2007 08:52 am Title: Revelations

I like this because it's a little more realistic.  I like the idea of Jim and Pam learning to navigate their relationship in the earlier days and taking it slow.  However I can't wait for the next chapter! 

Reviewer: super_perfect Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 29, 2007 12:32 am Title: Revelations

please please more and quickly!!! i love this story. write faster!

Reviewer: Amy Anonymous 9 [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2007 06:07 pm Title: Making an Effort was going so good...I really hate Karen in this stroy, but other thatn that I am really enjoying it.  Can't wait to see the next chapter!

Reviewer: Julie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2007 12:51 am Title: The First Date

ahhh!!  I just read all seven chapters!!!  They're so wonderful  pleeeeeeease write more!

Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous 9 [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2007 09:25 pm Title: Space Between Us

This chapter was good...kind of sad though.  I think that of course the next shoudl do something to bring Pam and Jim back together somehow.  Maybe the grapic design internship or the merger.  They have both been done a ton so maybe you should try something completely different like maybe Pam tranfers to Stamford or just gets a totally different job there.  You could also make Jim come back because Roy won't leave Pam alone....maybe he goes a little crazy? (i dont think I have read one like that yet)

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