Date: June 16, 2018 04:08 pm Title: Revelations
I really wish this was finished. It's such. A. Cliffhanger. And at a point that I don't think is quite emotionally justified (they really need to learn to talk to each other before making decisions) so I wish I could know how it would work out.
Date: September 16, 2008 10:38 am Title: Revelations
hey. Just came across this stroy. Any chance it's going to be updated? It's really good!
Author's Response: Yes it will be updated - I'm on a writing kick, so keep looking out! Glad you like! :) Thank you!
Date: February 04, 2007 08:52 am Title: Revelations
I like this because it's a little more realistic. I like the idea of Jim and Pam learning to navigate their relationship in the earlier days and taking it slow. However I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: January 29, 2007 12:32 am Title: Revelations
please please more and quickly!!! i love this story. write faster!
Date: January 16, 2007 01:53 pm Title: Revelations
ooh, this sounds promising! Cannot wait to see where this goes, ahem!
BTW -- the formatting is a little tough to read -- some paragraph breaks would make it read much easier.
Author's Response: Duly noted: the next chapter will be up soon and I will fix the paragraph breaks :) Thanks!