Reviews For Dare You To Move
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Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous 9 [Report This]
Date: January 18, 2007 03:10 pm Title: Maybe I'm Amazed

I feel so sorry for Pam in this chapter.  I hope things get happier from now on!

Reviewer: DunderSnob Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18, 2007 09:12 am Title: Maybe I'm Amazed

Oh my god...Omigod...OMG!!! I'm gripping his sweater right along with her!!!

Reviewer: Snoznoodle Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16, 2007 08:40 pm Title: Telling the Truth

Nice story! Love the song too by the way

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16, 2007 06:14 pm Title: Telling the Truth

Not a slow chapter -- but a necessary one, given the AU you have created.  This is really intriguing and I'm dying to see where this lead Pam & Jim.  She's still recovering from a long-term relationship, one that clipped her wings and trying to figure out who she is now & who she wants to be.  Jim on the other hand is still in reaction mode.  But they both want to be together, so how do they reconcile that?  I'll be checking in to see how they manage!

Reviewer: Beth Anonymous 9 [Report This]
Date: January 16, 2007 03:03 pm Title: Telling the Truth

Aww...it started out so happy :( It was good!  I hope the next chapter ends a little happier (please)!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16, 2007 01:53 pm Title: Revelations

ooh, this sounds promising!   Cannot wait to see where this goes, ahem!

BTW -- the formatting is a little tough to read -- some paragraph breaks would make it read much easier. 



Author's Response: Duly noted: the next chapter will be up soon and I will fix the paragraph breaks :) Thanks!

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