10 [Report This]Date: January 26, 2007 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 2
This is a great story..Keep it up!! I'll be back on Monday hopefully to find more updates!!
10 [Report This]Date: January 26, 2007 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
I can't wait to hear Karen's reaction and see what happens next with Jim! Please don't leave us in suspense too long!
Date: January 26, 2007 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm so glad you continued this! I love that Karen just asks for the truth. Very true to her character.
Date: January 26, 2007 09:35 am Title: Chapter 2
aw, this is so sad :( but it's really good, you should definitely keep going! i especially liked the little insight into Kevin and Stacey
Date: January 18, 2007 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Really good. I can't wait for the next installment!
Date: January 18, 2007 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
I actually liked it from Pam;s perspective though I like how you alternated towards the end. Keep going!
8 [Report This]Date: January 18, 2007 09:52 am Title: Chapter 1
oh wow! What a fabulous beginning! I would love to hear about Jim's perspective, and then I think from Karen's. That's such a shocking way for her to find out the truth, I would love to hear her take on it!
Date: January 18, 2007 09:45 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow. Wow. I actually feel bad for everyone, including Roy. I keep wondering if on the show Roy will demand an answer from Pam, but he just seems so set on changing and being a better person. But if he were to relapse...
Very interesting. Please continue. Jim's POV would be good.
Date: January 18, 2007 08:54 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow, I really enjoyed reading this! IF ONLY something like this would happen on the show. Loved when Pam finally looked at Jim... even more, I loved how Jim was looking at her :)I do hope you continue. Regarding your AN, it might work coming from Jim's POV, considering what's about to happen with Karen and Pam.
Date: January 18, 2007 08:19 am Title: Chapter 1
Definitely want to read more of this. I imagined Roy would be a terrible drunk and he was
Date: January 18, 2007 04:19 am Title: Chapter 1
Keep on writing. I like this one.
Date: January 18, 2007 02:00 am Title: Chapter 1
Oooo nice! whatever u do, keep going! if jim punched roy it would definetly be the biggest highlight of the season (unless Jam get married or sumthin of course). but yeh it was great!
Date: January 18, 2007 01:04 am Title: Chapter 1
"But when Jim looked into Pam’s eyes, then Karen’s, he knew it had barely begun."
I'd love to read the fallout of this line in addition to Jim's pov.
Date: January 17, 2007 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Juic-Y! Bring it on! I can't wait to read what happens next now that the cat is out of the bag! I don't think I've ever read about Jim and Roy actually coming to blows before...I was on the edge of my seat.