Date: January 23, 2007 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved Pam's "Oh shit!" Such a great story. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Hee, thanks. I can't really picture Pam saying that out loud, but I can definitely picture her saying it to herself in her head.
Date: January 23, 2007 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like that you made Karen a little pushy (e.g., her questions re: Roy) and having that trigger this whole exchange. Felt right. Also, Pam's reticence, ambivalence, awkwardness, pain, not knowing what to say...you really made that vivid. Now must hear her convo with Jim pronto! (Please?)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad the characters'actions rang true... I hope chapter 2 lives up to your expectations!
Date: January 23, 2007 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
You can't leave it like that. More please
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Date: January 23, 2007 11:35 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG, this is like season finale cliffhanger! Holy smokes! And it sounds exactly like I would expect Karen & Pam to talk. Who are you anyway???? Mindy? BJ? Greg Daniels?
Author's Response: Hehe wow, what a huge compliment! I hope chapters 2 and 3 live up to the firsat chapter!
Date: January 23, 2007 11:25 am Title: Chapter 1
ooh, hurry and post more! I'm dying to see Jim's reactino to all this!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Date: January 23, 2007 11:21 am Title: Chapter 1
I mean, does he act like he is?
Ahh. The equivelent of "Why? Did she say something?"
Oh these two. And the cameras and the awkward...
I cannot wait to 'hear' their conversation.
No pressure but just hurry up will you? ;)
Author's Response: Wow, I totally didn't mirror the "why did she say something?" sentiment on purpose! Cool! Maybe I shouldn't have admitted that and just let everyone think I was clever...
Date: January 23, 2007 11:14 am Title: Chapter 1
Don't stop! Don't leave us hanging!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Date: January 23, 2007 11:08 am Title: Chapter 1
I like how natural your dialogue is. And Karen's awkwardness is very nice at the beginning of this. I cannot wait to see more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you think the dialogue is natural. That's one of the things that I always have to put extra work into.
Date: January 23, 2007 10:03 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG. Seriously, when are you going to post the second chapter. This -- was AWESOME. Seriously. Seriously. When?
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
10 [Report This]Date: January 23, 2007 08:38 am Title: Chapter 1
So realistic, it's scary. Have you been going through the writer's trash cans or something ;) Can't wait for Chap. II.
Author's Response: Hehe, what a huge compliment! Thanks so much!
Date: January 23, 2007 08:27 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow, talk about wishful thinking. That's a great way for it to happen. Unfortunately, I'm worried that when Karen questions her, Pam will deny, deny, deny her feelings and Karen will go back and tell Jim this, thus dragging it out even more.
I'm also worried that Karen will inadvertently share info with Roy about Pam and Jim's history before she finds out about the engagement. Yikes[/Jim]
Anyway, waiting eagerly for Chapter 2....and the smutty ending! :)
Author's Response: Thanks!
I don't know if Karen will confront Pam at all on the show, because I think, by the way she reacted, she knows all she needs to after Jim confessed that he does still have feelingss for Pam. so I don't know if anything like this would really happen on the show, but it's fun to imagine. And I'd love if Roy found out about the Jim/Pam thing.
Date: January 23, 2007 07:33 am Title: Chapter 1
Now that's just cruel...come on...MORE!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I will put up chapter 2 tomorrow.
10 [Report This]Date: January 23, 2007 07:26 am Title: Chapter 1
to be continued....???? Are you TRYING to kill me???
I expect an update within the hour. The hour! Do you hear me??? :-D
Author's Response: Heee. I'm still kneading the second chapter. I may post it tomorrow. Thanks!