Date: February 01, 2007 03:34 am Title: Numbered
You already know I'm in basic awe of the brilliance of this fic, so this is just a simple review - I love, love, loved the chapter title of Parched.
OK, fine, I've got more; I love what Pam's doing, because I imagine that's what Jim did when he first got to Stamford - except of course not with experimental classes and things, but more of just work. [maybe that's why everyone thought he was kiss-up, back in Stamford?] I also adore that we didn't see a thing of what happened that summer in the show, so this is basically an imaginary situation that's completely believable and in-character. Awesome.
Also, Numbered is possibly my favourite chapter, because I adore the recurring theme - 120. The second one is Abandoned. Goodness.
Can't wait for another five hundred words! Keep writing, this is probably my favourite incomplete fic on-site at the moment.
Date: February 01, 2007 01:16 am Title: Numbered
Oh my goodness, this story is like crack, I can't get enough! This is such a brilliant concept! I can't wait to see what you do with it! Keep 'em coming, lol!
Date: January 31, 2007 08:16 pm Title: Numbered
I registered just so i could comment on this. I usually just pass by the multi-chapter stories that have yet to be completed, but I happened upon this when I was extremely bored and sick in bed.
For the past few days, I've come on to the site specifically hoping that there'd be more to this story. I've gotten my fiance into it too. It's my favorite.
Thank you!
Date: January 31, 2007 07:44 pm Title: Numbered
Man. This stops just as it gets interesting. Figures. I agree with what kath said on TWOP, I'm really glad you're naming the chapters, because it makes it a lot easier to remember where I left off when you update. Because now I have to read more!! Gah.
Your title is so perfect.
Author's Response: ooh! THANKS! and hey, do you think i can i get a link? i never know what you guys are talking about over on TWOP. but i just registered, so it'd be awesome to have a place to start!
Date: January 31, 2007 05:53 pm Title: Numbered
I'm going to say this again because it's really the only thing I can think of to say (beyond I LOVE IT and IT IS AMAZING) - MORE MORE MORE. <3
Date: January 31, 2007 05:44 pm Title: Numbered
wow, this just keeps better and better. i seriously love it. keep going and go quickly!
Date: January 31, 2007 05:06 pm Title: Numbered
Yes, a hearty second that I'm dying for more chapters, too! Also, I want to tell you how amazed I am at the introspection you are able to convey in each batch of 100 words. Freaking beautiful.
Date: January 31, 2007 04:03 pm Title: Numbered
Oh my god, I have to say that you have some of the cruelest cliffhangers of any author on this site. What's on the paper! Ahh! Dying! Great chapters.