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Reviewer: Mary Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2007 11:26 am Title: Chapter 4

Um, I'm completely obsessed with this story, and everytime I see a new chapter my heart pretty much leaps. This is so good, and I really can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: January 26, 2007 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 4

Sweet confessions of deeper feelings AND Jim dressed up in all-out disco? Excellent chapter!

Reviewer: Nestani Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 26, 2007 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 4

Oooh! A '70s party! Jim in a white suit! Pam making a move! I like it! (Oh, and as a "Gilmore Girls" fan, kudos on the title.)

Reviewer: moofoot Signed [Report This]
Date: January 26, 2007 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 4

I love you for updating when I was read the chapter!! You don't know how happy that made me. =P Seriously. I'm a dork.

And I love you for writing this - Pam having a friend, Pam *being* a friend, Jim having a past [I always knew that something else had to have happened to him before, something like Pam but a little different; there's something so deep about the way he acts and feels and things that I don't think Pam was the first], Jim being a dork [and dressing in a afro and white suit!! I would pay good, good money to see that, I can promise you that] and - everything. I love Sadie, I like Jonathan, I love Dwight and paintball.
I love the final Jim/Pam scene, and I would love to see what happens from there.

This has made me grin a lot more than a lot of things have in a while. Awesome in more ways than one - thanks for writing this!!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 26, 2007 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 4

OMG!  I just looove this: “I want to be more than that.”  And Jim in the white disco suit -- priceless!

Reviewer: DunderSnob Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 26, 2007 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 4

Holy friggen hell!!! That was awesome....!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!!

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