9 [Report This]Date: December 26, 2007 11:08 am Title: Chapter 5
Jim Halpert in a white leisure suit has got to be one of my favorite mental pictures! This was very well done!
10 [Report This]Date: January 30, 2007 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 5
I really liked it! I don't normally like original characters but Sadie was well-written and seemed to fit in effortlessly with Jim's backstory. Good stuff!
Date: January 29, 2007 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 5
Hah! Such a cute twist! I loved this! Thank you for sharing it!
Date: January 29, 2007 09:21 am Title: Chapter 5
Wow now that was a twist hearing it was Jim's idea. Loved the 70s party theme.
Date: January 29, 2007 12:19 am Title: Chapter 5
seriously, the only review i can give you is this: it can't possible be done, right? there is too much more to this!!! more more more!!! otherwise i loved it. and the twist at the end that this was jim's idea? nice! more more more.
Date: January 28, 2007 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 5
This was an awesome story, and the fact that it was your first fic is quite impressive! The twist that Jim was in on it was such a sweet surprise. I hope we see more from you.
Date: January 28, 2007 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 5
AH! Love that Jim was behind it all! And overall, the whole angle, about Pam being worried about Jim being mad at her is a novel approach. Nicely done. Looking forward to seeing more from you. Perhaps an epilogue where Pam does invite Jim in? Maybe for dinner, a movie, Parcheesi?
Author's Response:
I was actually considering an epilogue, and I may write it yet-- but in the meantime, I have a few hundred lines of Beowulf to translate. Sadly, fanfic continuations will have to wait.
Thanks for your review/suggestion!
9 [Report This]Date: January 28, 2007 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 5
wow! That little twist at the end was great! I do kind of wish we could have known more about Pam's reaction to it all! I love Sadie too and the whole back story with her and jim....great job!
Date: January 28, 2007 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 5
wow, i was suprised by the end.... jim is very cunning :) enjoy it. good job for a first!
10 [Report This]Date: January 28, 2007 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ahaha! I thought the ending was great. Good to know Jim can still set up a scheme, right? Great story, thanks for writing it!
Date: January 28, 2007 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 5
Wow, I did not see that last twist coming. Hee. Great story - sweet, without being over the top. I kinda love that Pam and Jim didn't spend the night together. As much as I love the idea of some Disco lovin', I still think Pam wouldn't quite go there yet. Nice job!