Reviewer: agate Signed
Date: April 26, 2007
Title: Chapter 1: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one
Okay. Okay. So. I finally, FINALLY read this whole thing, like, in one sitting because I couldn't stop, and all I have to say is DAMN, this hit the spot. It hit all kinds of spots. I mean, not just the totally giddy, awesome stuff like the cruise flirting and the drunk hooking up which was all so, so real, but also the great character insights into how Jim is flawed and how Pam has changed and how Ryan might be if he really started to care for someone. And omg the end! I loved that you had Pam leaving and Pam and Ryan getting together, I mean, with the direction and growth you were giving the characters it just couldn't have worked out any other way. This was a hugely satisfying, totally kickass read and I enjoyed the hell out of every word of it. <3 <3 <3