OoOoOoOoOo!! I definetly like where this is going!! There is just something about pirates!!! mmmm...but wow...such an intese story and there is only two chapters so far! I love how michael is the crazy captain and Jim his first mate. I would loooooved to see Jim hunt Royce down and challange him to a duel (wiinning of course) and he is out of the picture where Pam is free to do what she wants. But what I really want is another update asap!!! Such a great start please continue!!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your lovely comment! And ooo, a duel. That will definitely need to be worked into the story! There will be more to come very soon...