Penname: pretzelhound Real name: Susanne
Member Since: June 25, 2007

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Summary:

This is along the same lines as my other Away From the Cameras, in the sense that I'm exploring scenes that might have happened off-camera (or simply those that we didn't get to see).

A few things: First, I'm working on the assumption that a lot of what I wrote in the AFtC for season II stands (though I likely won't reference any of it here), up until Casino Night.  (Clearly I was quite off about what happened after the kiss...heh.)

Second, there will be flashbacks filling in the blanks of what happened immediately after CN (how long did Jim work? how did he and Pam ultimately leave things? how did she end things with Roy? how did Jim find out about her cancelling the wedding?); the flashbacks will happen largely in the chapters pre-merger (to keep things interesting for Jim/Pam fans during their physical separation).  


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Humor, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22172 Read Count: 18862 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: January 20, 2007 Updated: June 28, 2007
Reviewer: pretzelhound Signed
Date: March 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Phyllis's Wedding - part I

I have just started reading all your stories. THANK YOU!!  Beautifully descriptive! Rips my heart out, and I can see all this happening in my head.  I can never get enough of these two, and I LOVE it all, even when the angst makes me wanna cry.

Are we going to get anymore updates on this one?  I'm dying for more.....



Author's Response:

Wow!  Thank YOU.  :)  I have to admit to abandoning this one because there didn't seem to be much interest in it (and I was working on other things at the time in which a few people did express an interest in, wanting updates, that sort of thing).  That said, if the inspiration for this one hits me again, I'll definitely come back to it, because I really would love to explore a lot of what we didn't get to see in season three. 

Anyway -- thank you so much for your thoughtful review!

Summary:

Jim and Pam’s first date is a significant event, but what of the time between the closing of the conference room door and dinner?


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4793 Read Count: 9155 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 11, 2007 Updated: August 14, 2007
Reviewer: pretzelhound Signed
Date: August 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Arrival

SB, I jumped up and down when I saw that you had written a fanfic! I have so much enjoyed your work on the JP and PD that I knew this would be good.

Nobody gets in the heads of these two like you do (except maybe the writers!).  I was glad to see that you have brought back the non-verbal communication that they were so good at.  You have stayed true to their characters - their few words meaning so much.  I actually teared up reading this. I also loved that Jim still had a "paradox".

What a great read!  I hope you find time to do more. 

Summary:

The final moments of Casino Night with a twist. Jim is on the phone with his sister as Pam walks into a dimly lit office.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2990 Read Count: 3357 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: March 19, 2008 Updated: March 19, 2008
Reviewer: pretzelhound Signed
Date: March 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

nice twist SB!  Almost made me cry at my desk..

I always look forward to reading anything you write. I'm a big fan of yours.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  You are too kind. 

Wow, you almost cried.  That's quite a compliment!  Thanks for reading!