Penname: JennInTheCity Real name: Jenn
Member Since: July 01, 2007

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Summary: How a little courage and honesty finally gave them both what they wanted.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 31928 Read Count: 71146 ePub Downloads: 10
[Report This] Published: April 28, 2008 Updated: September 25, 2008
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: May 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: and sore must be the storm

I really, really liked this! I love Pam cleaning Jim's place and just not wanting to leave. I can't wait to see Pam meeting Jim's family!

Author's Response: Glad you\'re enjoying it! Thanks for reading. :)

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed 9
Date: September 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: that kept so many warm

Oh, I'm so happy to see this story updated again! Yay!

Author's Response: Well, I\'m glad to see a couple of people are still reading it! Thanks :)

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: September 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 10

Oh, I really liked this chapter! I think it's good that Jim is having to face all the facets of Pam and figure out that there are things he really doesn't know about the people in her life. Love that Pam ditched him with Roy and turns out, Roy's not always an ass. Can't wait for what's next!

Author's Response: For some reason I feel this need to defend Roy as a decent person. There was certainly plenty of evidence to that effect in the show--his conversation with Pam in the diner, his attempt to apologize to Jim. So I thought it would be good to let Jim see a little of his good side. I\'m glad you liked it! Thanks. :)

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: September 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: and on the strangest sea

Super cute! Love it!

Author's Response: Thanks Jenn! Not too much substance here, just fun, but that\'s okay sometimes, right? :)

Summary: Past Featured StoryJim's been acting a little strange these days.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Humor, Inner Monologue, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12504 Read Count: 31866 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: April 30, 2008 Updated: May 08, 2008
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: May 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Okay, I just got back from a week's vacation and this is the very best thing I've read that I missed while I was gone! I'm going through to read it a second time now because I love it so much! Pam really works as the narrator here and I really love the way you weave their work life and their home life into each other. Excellent work!

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: May 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This is the chapter that really sold this story for me! I can completely imagine Jim in this scenario after the talk from Ryan. He's never cared about his job, but now he's got "plans." Love. it.

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: May 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Every chapter I love this story more and more. I really enjoyed the trip back to Jim's first day and the beginning of Jim and Pam. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Thanks for all the feedback Jenn! I\'m glad you enjoyed it. I\'ve had a lot of fun writing it. Next one will finish it up.

Foresight by time4moxie Rated: K+ [Reviews - 15] 9
Summary: Jim and Pam make the most of their early dismissal from work. Set immediately after the end of Did I Stutter?

Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3168 Read Count: 4959 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: May 04, 2008 Updated: May 04, 2008
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: May 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love that Jim is still going to propose! And I really love the backstory with Wallace that you added. Great post-ep!

The Saboteur by wendolf Rated: K+ [Reviews - 23] 14
Summary: A look at why Jim is the way he is, especially when it comes to his job. Inspired mostly by Local Ad, Survivor Man, Branch Wars and Did I Stutter.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3327 Read Count: 3862 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: May 05, 2008 Updated: May 05, 2008
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: May 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, I just adore this! I've just seen the episode a couple of hours ago for the first time and this fits the tone so naturally! Wonderful work!

Author's Response: Thanks, Jenn! Glad you liked it. Yep, that episode just made me sad for Jim -- especially that look on Jim\'s face after Pam\'s \"Because you\'re so important\" line. Just broke my heart. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Summary: A series of oneshots and vignettes on Pam's glasses, and Jim's opinion of Pam's glasses, and how much harder it is to be a receptionist when you're half-blind (that's what she said. No time! But she did! NO TIME!). Fun with the "fun fact" we learned about Pam in DIS.
Categories: Episode Related, Jim and Pam, Present, Past, Future
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Drabble, Fluff
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1465 Read Count: 2498 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 05, 2008 Updated: May 05, 2008
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: May 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Then and Now

As a girl who got glasses in the 4th grade and has always hated them - I totally get this. Here's to guys like Jim who make us feel beautiful, even when we feel like we're back in the 4th grade :)

Summary: Past Featured Story“Pam and I have hurt a lot of people, but mostly we’ve hurt each other. There’s no coming back from that.”
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: David Wallace, Jim, Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63735 Read Count: 53304 ePub Downloads: 15
[Report This] Published: May 05, 2008 Updated: July 27, 2008
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: July 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I had trouble with parts of this story, but I'm glad I hung on till the end. I love future you gave them and you had such great imagery throughout. I really liked that you gave them some fertility trouble. It kept them very real and I really liked the conversation they had on Christmas about wanting children. Just excellent.

I can't wait to see what you are cooking up next!

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: May 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Great chapter! Maybe a little soap opera-y with the Affair Guy punching and kicking Jim at the party, but it did give him a good excuse to quit and get out. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: I think people will do a lot of crazy things when they\'ve had a bit to drink and are in an emotionally charged situation like they were! I\'m glad you enjoyed the chapter and hope the rest won\'t disappoint! Thanks for taking the time to review!

Summary: There's a bit the documentary crew didn't catch in the finale. (Spoilers for S4 Finale)

Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4241 Read Count: 9504 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: May 16, 2008 Updated: July 11, 2008
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: July 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Cheese on Toast

LOVE IT! Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks so much, Jenn!

Summary: Fluff + Jam = Happiness. Just little phone conversations I could imagine Jim and Pam having. Spoilers through the S5.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14239 Read Count: 49453 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 21, 2008 Updated: September 28, 2009
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed 9
Date: May 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: And This is Why My Eyes are Closed

I'm really happy that you decided to continue this piece because I really love it! You seem to encapsulate them in these little conversations that have all the right characterizations plus the reality of being in a long-distance relationship. Just really great job!

Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m having a lot of fun writing it, and it\'s interesting to try to think of what sort of issues they might really be having. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: June 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Lest the strings should break, and the music be done

These just keep getting better and better. Their conversations seems true to character without being cutesy or trite like other fics I've read.

Favorite line:
because I can’t imagine any sort of future that doesn’t have you in it.
Just perfect!

Author's Response: Thank you! I try really hard to keep them in character, and I\'m so glad you think it\'s working. I really appreciate your taking the time to review :D.

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed 10
Date: October 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Until they found me

I absolutely love this! Another fabulous chapter that sounds just like I hope their off-screen convos go. I love that Jim practiced the "honey" and it still didn't come off right. Just pitch perfect!

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: September 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Hidden Pictures

Funny enough - I was just re-reading this story on the bus today on my way back from New York. Fabulous to see a new chapter! Great work!

Author's Response: I'm glad I can help make the bus ride that much shorter :). Thanks so much for the review.

Summary: Past Featured StorySpoilers for "Goodbye Toby."

You finally understand what it was like for her while you were in Stamford.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1572 Read Count: 4193 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 31, 2008 Updated: May 31, 2008
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: May 31, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: If I could open my arms and span the length of the isle of Manhattan

LOVE. IT.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Summary: Past Featured Story

The first week is the longest. A visit.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: None
Genres: Claustrophobic Spaces, Inner Monologue, Romance, Weekend, Wet Pam/Jim
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2409 Read Count: 13600 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: June 01, 2008 Updated: June 02, 2008
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: June 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Early

I am so excited about this! I've been dying for a good story about their separation from one of my favorite authors! Just fabulous :)

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much, Jenn. I really appreciate your enthusiasm. Hope the next part doesn't disappoint!

Summary: "Oh, mister, wait until you see/What I'm gonna be/I've got a plan, a demand and it just began/And if you're right, you'll agree..." Let's have a bit of fun with our dear girl before TPTB let us know what she really did with her summer vacation, shall we?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: Week Days
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7471 Read Count: 21572 ePub Downloads: 10
[Report This] Published: June 02, 2008 Updated: June 08, 2008
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: June 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: The Second Month

I can't get over how awesome this is. Really. Just fab!

Author's Response: You\'re making me blush, lady...

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: June 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: The First Month

Really great :) Love the part about Dwight and the beets!

Author's Response: Thank you! The convergence of beets, kosher cooking, and Dwight was just too much for me to resist.

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: June 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: The Third Month

Beautiful. I loved it!

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: July 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: The First Month

So, I've read this like 20 times - it's a go to "good read" when I get bored at work (which happens more than I should admit on the "national internet") and I realized that I never asked you the question that always comes up in my head when I'm reading it - Do you actually have the mixes written down (songs, not just artists) that Jim makes for Pam? I'd love to have a musical companion for the chapters :)

Author's Response: I won\'t tell a soul, Jenn. :) To answer your question, no, I don\'t have the mixes all laid out, but, I did have some songs in mind for the artists I listed in the story. For the \"Because You Are in New York and Are Cooler than Me\" mix, it\'s most likely \"Sister Jack\" - Spoon, \"First Night\" - The Hold Steady, \"Blame It on Cain\" - Elvis Costello, almost anything off of Horses for Patti Smith, \"Summer Babe (Winter Version)\" - Pavement, \"Be My Baby\" - The Ronettes, *definitely* \"Myriad Harbour\" - The New Pornographers, and \"Keep the Car Running\" by The Arcade Fire. The \"Let\'s Murder Andy Bernard\" mix would include \"Death or Glory\" - The Clash, \"If I Should Fall from Grace with God\" - The Pogues, \"Violet\" - Hole, and \"Firestarter\" - The Prodigy. The \"I am So Going to Tear Your Clothes off...\" mix would include anything off of Dummy by Portishead, \"Brandy Alexander\" - Feist, *definitely* \"House of Cards\" - Radiohead (the lyrics are quite Pam & Jim S2 appropriate - 1st lines \"I don\'t want to be your friend, I just want to be your lover.\"), and \"Lay It Down\" - Al Green. Finally, the \"Have We Lost Our F-ing Minds?\" mix would include anything off of Maxinque - Tricky, I don\'t have a strong opinion on the Beck, \"Boyz\" - M.I.A, \"Myxomatosis\" - Radiohead (I\'m thinking Jim likes Radiohead. He would.), and \"Professional Widow\" - Tori Amos. There would, of course, be more songs on each mix, but that\'s the basic idea. There\'s probably enough songs here to make a short \"Better Version of Me\" mix, actually...

Summary: A rainy Friday night, some tears, and plenty of junk food might just lead Pam to realize a few things, like how she really feels about her best friend. Set in the early part of Season 2.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Romance, Weekend, Wet Pam/Jim
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4815 Read Count: 10327 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: June 07, 2008 Updated: June 16, 2008
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed
Date: June 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: The Knock

This sounds like a really good set up! I'm interested to see where you go from here :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I hope the rest of the story lives up to the set up. I'm warning you now, it's heavy on the fluff. Hope that's not a problem. ;)

Bravado by callisto Rated: M [Reviews - 22] 16
Summary: Pam discovers that going to school is a lot more complicated than she thought.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2717 Read Count: 5240 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: June 08, 2008 Updated: June 08, 2008
Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed 10
Date: June 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: if love remains

Fantastic! I love that you brought up this issue and I LOVED the resolution!

“You’re very sweet. Ring, please."
BEST. LINE. EVER.

Author's Response: Thanks!! I\'m glad you liked it!