What if Jim and Pam erased all memories of each other? Would they be able to start again? How would Roy and Karen react? Set post-Season Two and loosely based off ideas from the film "Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind."
10 I've been reading this site all summer, but I finally caved and registered just so I could tell you that your writing is FANTASTIC. Everything on this site is pretty good, but you... you could do novels. You SHOULD do novels. I find interest in the smallest details, the way you convey the characters' little quirks and subtly hint at their feelings and things they might be remembering. It's the "show, don't tell" they drill into your brain in poetry... you've mastered it, and it makes everything feel so very real and... I'm failing at describing it, but after reading a paragraph or so of the first chapter I actually said (aloud, to myself, like a dork) "wow." Also I love how there's a lot of Clementine in this new Pam but she's still so definitely Pam. Basically... you're awesome and you've got me hooked. And I love your name (does it come from the song I think it does?)
/end fangirl
Oooooh a twist!!! I love it!!! I'll say it again, write novels! Please! You've got the verbal skills and the creativity!
Also: my married 40-something mother met Rhett Miller (and by met, I mean she saw him walking around after the show and said hi to him and that was it) a week or so ago and she's been going on about it like a lovesick teenager ever since. But I love that song. My fiance proposed to me at the park, perhaps because of it, so it has special significance to me now. :)
one more??? only one more?? ahhhhhh what will happen! I saw this going on forever! I'm on the edge of my seat!
Author's Response: You know, I sort of don't want it to end either! : ) But I always saw this story arc finishing after Chapter 10, so we'll see how that pans out. Glad the story's holding your interest!!
Jim and Pam and two telephones, post-Season 3.Wow. This was awesome. But the biggest thought in my mind is oh please please do another chapter when he comes home! Cause after reading this... yeah, you would write it very, VERY well. You must share your smutty gifts! We would love you (even more) forever! 0:)
Author's Response: Thank you, koneko! As for a follow-up chapter, not in Talk; maybe in a sequel called Physical Presence. ;)