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I'm not a writer, but I am an excellent editor (or at least I like to think so!). I've enjoyed reading your work, so if I can help out and beta something, I'd be happy to do it.
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Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Dream/Fantasy, Humor, Inner Monologue
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 76608 Read Count: 29393 ePub Downloads: 4
Date: March 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Looking Into The Mirror
It's interesting. So many stories have Pam feeling nervous about sleeping with Jim since she's only been with Roy (which makes sense, don't get me wrong); I like that you've acknowledged that Pam actually *does* have experience, especially given how long she and Roy were together. This: "I know that being with someone for ten years and completely trusting them….in that department….definitely means that you try different things." is a perfect line.
However, if I were Pam? I would have taken a shower! ;-)
Author's Response: I'm glad that you picked up on that and thought it was interesting. Because I do agree, that most stories are contrary to mine on that point. In my story, at least, I'm writing it far more that Pam is worried about what the sex means, or what it might do to their relationship....and less about the actual act itself. That said, she isn't....despite her claims...completely not-nervous about it, of course, but I think her being some sexually naive woman is pretty silly. Also, Pam's lack of "preparation" for the date will be referenced later (hopefully humorously). Thanks for the review KAB.
I added one more chapter for a letter on Monday morning, following their date.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Angela, Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: First Dates
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8495 Read Count: 59587 ePub Downloads: 8
Date: March 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Write Me
Gah! Hurry or I'm not going to get any sleep! ;-) Also, Pam is the DiabolicAL one. Just a small thing. You have a really good "Jim voice."
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble, Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 77452 Read Count: 232768 ePub Downloads: 64
Date: March 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 16: Are we really flirting? Or are you just pretending to be you flirting with me actually being me?
For God's sack, write faster!