I love this :) Your words here are all ones that I can hear and imagine. The descriptions of summer and the heat are fantastic. Your stories always have such gorgeous imagery, and this one is no exception. I especially enjoyed the ending of this chapter.. ‘Show me more,’ he beams at her, leaning in to gently kiss her forehead.

Just great. I'm looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Glad the words felt right to you - and that you liked that last line of Jim's. I love that he encourages her and how delighted he is when she challenges herself. Anyway, thanks for your very kind review, katepotatoe!