Penname: maisoui Real name: Rachel
Member Since: January 26, 2008

Bio:
College student who occasionally dream about Jim and Pam..hmmmmmm..
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Five Days by Jodithgrace Rated: K [Reviews - 16] 14
Summary: How Jim Met Pam. A prequel to my Jam Sessions Series.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11965 Read Count: 12488 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 29, 2006 Updated: July 29, 2006
Reviewer: maisoui Signed
Date: January 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Monday

Heart-stopping, fabulous, amaaaazing characterization with both Pam and Jim, but especially with Jim. The whole "one look across a croweded room" thing was absolutely brilliant, and so so Jim. *adore*

Distance Learning by time4moxie Rated: MA [Reviews - 361] 184
Summary: Past Featured StoryPost-"Gay Witch Hunt"; Pam's growing up and realizing that if you want something, sometimes you have to fight for it.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 128465 Read Count: 418390 ePub Downloads: 126
[Report This] Published: September 23, 2006 Updated: September 23, 2007
Reviewer: maisoui Signed 5
Date: January 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OK, well I have good and bad things to say regarding this story. I'll start
with the good.

First of all, you mentioned in your author notes that this was your first fanfiction attempt, and on that note I have to commend you on the sheer length of this. I really liked how this was AU with a mixture of events that were based off of the show, and your grammar is satisfactory. These aspects really added to the enjoyability of this fic.

However, there were many things that bothered me too, primarily the general OOC-ness of it all. For example, did Pam really have to cry every 5 minutes? Also, (imho)the JAM banter was slightly off in some ways, for example, Pam and Jim called each other "Halpert" and "Beesley" way too much than they actually do in the show. So that kind of turned me off.

Little stuff like that probably shouldn't bother me;a fanfic really can't be exactly like the show and this was, after all, AU. Just felt like it had to be said.

PS: To my discredit, I actually did not finish this fanfic, and I have yet to read any of your other fanfics. So I might be being unfair or something.