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The Real Commentary by MrsLloyderineHalpert Rated: K+ [Reviews - 27] 12
Summary:

Set sometime after season 4. Jim and Pam decide to watch the documentary for the first time, together.  Just some fluff with a dash of angst for good measure.

 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2842 Read Count: 16181 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: September 01, 2008 Updated: September 28, 2008
Reviewer: officeromance Signed
Date: September 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: The Dundies

I love the story idea. My only suggestion is that in this chapter you could have touched on that unknown question asked by Pam in the end. Can't wait for more!