Penname: BluetimesTwo Real name: Jenn
Member Since: November 13, 2010

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Fault Lines by Deedldee Rated: MA [Reviews - 132] 60
Summary: When the world cracks opened and the earth quakes, how do they survive?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Cece Halpert, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Drama, Married, Romance, Steamy, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 52854 Read Count: 33792 ePub Downloads: 25
[Report This] Published: May 11, 2011 Updated: August 09, 2011
Reviewer: BluetimesTwo Signed 10
Date: May 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I love this. And I love that you updated so quickly! Keep it coming!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you're liking this still, and I hope to have the next chapter up either tonight or tomorrow! :) Thanks for the feedback, it really means a lot!

Reviewer: BluetimesTwo Signed 10
Date: May 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I always enjoy your writing and this is no exception. Fantastic start! I thought for sure that Pam was getting the axe because Jo found out her office administrator job was made up.

Really well done, can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the lovely compliment! I tried to keep an element of surprise to the first chapter. I appreciate your encouraging review so much! Thank you! :-)

Reviewer: BluetimesTwo Signed 10
Date: May 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'm really enjoying this. Keep the updates coming.

Author's Response: I'm so happy to hear that, Blue! Thanks so much for the feedback! More on the way soon, I promise! :)

Reviewer: BluetimesTwo Signed 10
Date: June 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

LOVED IT! The fluff, the smut, it was perfect! And, the call back to season 1? Pure Awesome! Keep the updates coming. :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I'm so happy to hear that! I try to keep the call backs to a minimum, but definitely thought both of the one's I included fit in with this chapter, very happy to hear you liked it! Much more on the way soon! Thanks so much for the continued support! :-)

Reviewer: BluetimesTwo Signed 10
Date: June 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Well, hello there Miss Speedy Updater! I didn't even get a chance to review the last chapter and here you are with another one! I loved them both, this story is just so fantastic. I'm very interested in seeing where Jim winds up. One one hand, I hope for the sake of his family, he finds a job soon, but on the other hand, I hope this story continues for a while. Keep the updates coming!

Author's Response: LOL Yeah, it's been a boring week at work, plus I've been into this story so much that I just keep on writing. So happy you're enjoying this story. I'm not quite done yet, so definitely stay tuned, hope you enjoy the third update that just went up! Have a great weekend! More on the way soon!

Acquisition by JennyC Rated: M [Reviews - 61] 31
Summary: AU story where Jim Halpert works for Sabre Corp. when they acquire Dunder Mifflin.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 63451 Read Count: 15020 ePub Downloads: 11
[Report This] Published: July 25, 2011 Updated: September 10, 2011
Reviewer: BluetimesTwo Signed 10
Date: July 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I love this! It's an interesting premise and I can't wait to see where it's going. I also love your play on "You'll never go back to this time..."

Reviewer: BluetimesTwo Signed 10
Date: August 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I didn't get time to review as often I would have liked because your updates are coming so fast, not that I'm complaining, but I'm really enjoying this story.

Jim's interaction with Pete had me LOL'ing. Eventhough we've only seen him a couple of times, I think you've done a good job of capturing Pete.

Keep the speedy updates coming!

Summary: Past Featured StoryAnswering a story idea from Klutzy Girl on the message board - the documentary airs and Jim watches season 3.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25245 Read Count: 23941 ePub Downloads: 8
[Report This] Published: August 15, 2011 Updated: October 10, 2011
Reviewer: BluetimesTwo Signed 10
Date: September 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Yes! Loved it! Perfect mixture of angst and sweetness. I also loved that they decided to delete "Phyllis's Wedding," I wish I could. :)

Author's Response: You're not the only one. I hoped that sounded authentic, because that was something I really wish I could do too, delete that episode, and some of the others during season 3. I can't watch that episode still to this day, and they're married with almost 2 kids.

Reviewer: BluetimesTwo Signed 10
Date: August 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love it! You write Jim so well, it's like you're inside his head.

I like how Jim watches the beginning of season 3, because sometimes that's how I watch it, skipping all the episodes without JAM interaction.

Update soon, I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, that's the nicest compliment! I'm glad my Jim sounds like Jim! :) I actually watch the same way when I'm watching repeats alone, with my finger on the fast forward button. Glad you think that fit in well here. I figured he wouldn't be interested in much else other than Pam. Next update is on the way very soon! :)

Reviewer: BluetimesTwo Signed 10
Date: October 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Aww, what a sweet ending. I loved this whole story. I hope you have something new planned!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm happy you liked it, thanks so much for being so supportive of this one! I'm not sure what to write next, I'm hoping it'll come to me soon. :)

Reviewer: BluetimesTwo Signed 10
Date: August 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Yay! I'm glad to hear that this is going to be longer than you thought. There's a lot of angst to cover.

I really can't wait to see Jim's response to Pam crying in the hallway.

Author's Response: You're right, there is a lot of angst to cover. I hadn't realized that I shouldn't gloss over another episode (notice how I forgot about the convention lol - I know, how terrible of me!) I'm really happy that you're enjoying this so far. More on the way soon! :)

Reviewer: BluetimesTwo Signed
Date: September 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'm just getting around to review the last 2 chapters because you're super speedy! Thanks for that! Sorry to hear you're having a rough week. Hope things turn around soon.

I am really enjoying this story. As I've said before, you write Jim so well. I love how obsessed Jim is with Pam winning in the art show not being included in the show. Maybe they will buy the DVD version with deleted scenes on it! :)

Author's Response: Sorry for the delay in review reply! Happy to see you enjoyed the early chapters of this story. Hopefully you enjoy the conclusion as much! I had a hard time deciding whether or not the documentary would show the art show thing, but ultimately thought for the story that they didn't show it and that would bother Jim. Glad you liked that part! :)

Reviewer: BluetimesTwo Signed 10
Date: September 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Yay for more! Can't wait for your next update. I love that you addressed the deleted scene from "PDA!"

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked the including of deleted scenes. I figure, even if we never saw it, they still happened. (minus the Pam giving Jim the middle finger during the Delivery - I'm so NOT on board with that, no matter how cranky Pam was) Thanks so much for always saying such nice things, and thanks for sticking with the story! :) Hope you enjoy the conclusion!

Away by unfold Rated: K+ [Reviews - 9] 12
Summary: Past Featured Story“So,” he says, “What’s changed about you in the week and a half that you’ve been in New York?”

Pam struggles with being apart from Jim while she's in New York.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Pam
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Oneshot
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1350 Read Count: 3390 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 21, 2011 Updated: August 21, 2011
Reviewer: BluetimesTwo Signed 10
Date: August 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was beautiful! Well done.

Choices by Deedldee Rated: K [Reviews - 6] 5
Summary: Set somewhere in the middle of "Business Trip." Pam in NYC before she comes home. A quick little drabbly one shot.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Drabble, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 769 Read Count: 1953 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 15, 2011 Updated: September 15, 2011
Reviewer: BluetimesTwo Signed 10
Date: September 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved it, very nice. I love your writing, don't ever stop!

Summary: Past Featured StorySeason 8 post episode one shots. Like "Harmony" only, they're Season 8. NOW COMPLETE.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Cece Halpert, Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Holiday, Kids/Family, Married, Oneshot, Pregnancy/Babies, Romance, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57219 Read Count: 71754 ePub Downloads: 50
[Report This] Published: September 27, 2011 Updated: May 14, 2012
Reviewer: BluetimesTwo Signed
Date: March 03, 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Infidelity is not a word in your life’s dictionary…

So I orginally read this on my phone the day it was updated because my internet was down. I didn't review then because I loathe typing on my phone. So here's a proper review (thanks to Verizon for coming to fix my internet a day early!)

"You can count on your hands the times you’ve chatted with her and still have fingers left over to hail a cab." That is my favorite line in the whole chapter becaus it's so true. I blame the writers.

I really liked this update (I know, I'm getting repetetive.) Pam's, "Don't let the bed bugs bite," had me lol'ing and it was so sweet and sentimental the way Jim dreamt about their wedding day. Keep updating, lady!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I'm happy you were able to get your internet fixed. Verizon can be such a pain in the you know what. That line you pointed out just sort of fell out of me and I had to leave it in. I absolutely blame the writers. I watch closely and have seen nothing between Jim and Kathy for any of this shenanigans to be going on. Well, not shenanigans, but she wants there to be. Blah I don't like Kathy at all - maybe even more than I disliked Karen. I'm so happy to hear that you enjoyed this chapter! :) Thank you!

Reviewer: BluetimesTwo Signed
Date: February 25, 2012 Title: Chapter 16: It made her feel safe.

Aww, Danielle, so cute. I am so glad you decided to keep these going. I can't wait to see what you have planned for post- "After Hours!"

Author's Response: Thanks lady! I'm glad I came back to them too with some nudging, thanks for that. :) I'm hoping you'll like what I did for After Hours. I had to do a re write of it after that deleted scene, which now I'm thinking I should point people to in my end note. Anyway, thanks, I'm so happy you liked this one and hope you enjoy the update too! Thank you :)

Reviewer: BluetimesTwo Signed
Date: February 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 15: It’ll be easier this time…

Wait! Why do you want to stop writing? Please don't! I love your stories and I ADORED this update. I love how they are both on the same wavelength about being apart, comparing it to Jim's time in Stamford.

Author's Response: I was in a rut, not really feeling like I had anymore ideas for these two, but I'm feeling re-inspired lately. Never say never! I'm so happy that you liked this update, and I'm sorry it took so long to reply to reviews! I'll try not to take so long next time. I love them being on the same wavelength, and can I just say I can now stare at your animated icon on the message board for hours. He's so pretty. :) Thanks for the support, hope you like the other updates!

Reviewer: BluetimesTwo Signed
Date: January 28, 2012 Title: Chapter 13: It's you and your wife, and your life

Oh, Danielle, I like you. That was great. Everyone who was griping about Jim even being at the pool party should come read this. The whole concept is a completely plausible explanation for Jim being there. Well done!

Author's Response: Thanks. I really didn't have an issue with him being at the party, and I didn't think he'd be so irresponsible to drink all that wine and then drive home. I'm glad you thought it was plausible and I'm happy that you liked it. I was nervous since I never wrote in second person before and without any dialogue. Glad you liked it! Thanks so much for all of the support! :)

Reviewer: BluetimesTwo Signed 10
Date: October 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: It's nice to dream...

That was cute. Keep 'em coming, lady!

Author's Response: Thanks! :) I'm really happy you liked it! More will be on the way, fear not lol

Reviewer: BluetimesTwo Signed 10
Date: October 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: If we could just slow this down

This was too cute. I really enjoyed it. I know I always say this, but you write Jim so well, it's like you're inside his head. Keep 'em coming!

Author's Response: Thanks! Happy you liked it, and thanks for the compliment. For some reason I find it easy to write Jim. Maybe I'm just a little too sarcastic like he is lol For me it's easier to get into his head than it is to get into Pam's for me. I tend to make her a little over dramatic at times. Anyways, happy you liked this one! :)

Reviewer: BluetimesTwo Signed 10
Date: September 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: If you don't stop crying...

That was sweet. I love having a glimpse into their family life. I know how you feel about writing, I'm stuck with my current WIP, as well. Hang in there, you'll get out of the funk!

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you continue to like these :) I'm hoping to have one up here every week. Yeah, I'm working ideas out with Callisto now on the other story. If you need any help with yours just let me know :)

Reviewer: BluetimesTwo Signed 10
Date: November 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Insight, in four parts - a bonus chapter

I've been a bad reviewer, so I apologize for that. Anyway, I really liked this bonus chapter. I especially liked the part about Pam's mom and her jealousy as I felt like it's a very realistic possibility.

Author's Response: No worries, I'm happy to see that you enjoyed this one. Something about the new Helene (I still call her that even though she's been on way more than the season 2 Helene lol) Anyway, something about her makes me feel like she's just a small itty bit jealous of Pam and Jim. Not to the extent that she'd wish them harm, but just because her marriage didn't work out and Pam and Jim are so close to one another, I think that it could be a point that Helene would envy. Glad you thought it was realistic! Thank you so much for the lovely review, and I'm so happy you liked it. Hoping to have another one after tonight's episode. We'll see. Thanks so much :)

Reviewer: BluetimesTwo Signed 10
Date: December 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: If this ever disappeared, the sun would never shine…

I loved this chapter! I really like the idea of Jim and Pam keeping Phillip's birth under wraps until after the cameras leave. Christmas bonus chapter? Yes, Please!

Author's Response: Thanks! It was the only logical reason I could come up with, and I'm so happy you thought it sounded believable! Thanks so much for the recommendation too! That's so awesome of you. I'm thinking about the Christmas chapter now, I may give it a try in a little bit. I have the idea in my head, just having a problem executing it. Thanks so much for this, I really appreciate it! Happy Holidays! xx

Summary: Jim moves to Stamford and tries to move on. Begins immediately after Casino Night. Slight spoilers through Season 3.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim
Genres: Angst, In Stamford
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2133 Read Count: 2747 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 12, 2011 Updated: October 13, 2011
Reviewer: BluetimesTwo Signed 10
Date: October 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Holy Grief Bone, Batman! That was beautiful, but so painful.

I'm so sorry to hear about your hard times. Beering you strength and hugs!

Author's Response: Thanks! It's gets a little easier every day. :)