Penname: Gland Real name:
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Distance Learning by time4moxie Rated: MA [Reviews - 361] 184
Summary: Past Featured StoryPost-"Gay Witch Hunt"; Pam's growing up and realizing that if you want something, sometimes you have to fight for it.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 128465 Read Count: 418384 ePub Downloads: 126
[Report This] Published: September 23, 2006 Updated: September 23, 2007
Reviewer: Gland Signed
Date: February 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm definitely enjoying it so far, but a couple of things have me wondering. Why does Pam cry so much? I don't think she is particularly teary in the show.

And why so much with the "Beesly" and "Halpert"? I think in the show Pam typically just calls him Jim and vice versa.

I also think the "I love yous" are a bit heavy handed so far. It's almost like Pam is coming off as desperate.

I am enjoying the story though and am looking forward to finishing. Thanks for writing!