And there's the crashing down moment. After all the build up in his head and the very sweet first impressions he's been having, yeah it was going to come as a blow. Very believable dynamic for how the first day is going thus far. Everyone's delightfully in character as well.

Still I really do like how you've got both Jim and Pam noticing just about everything about each other. There are sparks flying all over the place between them. That part is fun to see. Can't wait to see where the rest of this is heading.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really enjoying writing them in this story (I've just leaned the hell into the romance novel tropes from the books I've been reading) so I'm glad it's working.

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Yup, that would be awkward. Still, she didn't pull back so that's something right? Loved the way you added in the 27 seconds. Such pauses are a hallmark of the early JAM relationship so it's good to see such familiar elements pop up.

Michael to save the rescue. Now there's something that doesn't often happen. There are times Michael has his good moments, where he's being sincere and all. That's the usual place for such a moment. Here though in a typical blustery-Michael moment he "saves the day" as you will. Very creative writing in that regard. I liked it.

Also liked how despite everything, Jim's still going on with the plan he and Pam came up with. Hopefully we see what kind of payoff that brings.

Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate the kind words about how I used Michael, since I was concerned about whether that worked. Don't worry, their plan will return in later episodes as well.

More with Marvel! Yay! I'm really enjoying Nerd!Pam so thanks for including that. Lots of good introspection on her part here. I do like that she's already starting to think about what she wants and doesn't want out of life. When they're at their best, Jim and Pam are great together and you bring that out well.

Also a lot of fun to see the creating of their Air-Fives.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm enjoying writing their dynamic, and dropping in Nerd!Pam is a lot of fun along the way. Thanks for the idea!

Interesting introspection on Jim's part. I get why he'd be so confused. For the most part he and Pam get on great, but there's the flinch creating this tension. I like how he really starts to get to know her as a way to try and get to the bottom of it.

The DC vs. Marvel debate was wonderful. As was the fact that she carries around a comic book like that. Especially an issue that's not nearly as well known as some of the Marvel standards.

Hey look it's Roy in need of a punching. She's a person you dope, not a dog for you to command. You make it so easy to hate Roy in all the best, this that's the word for it, ways.

And it in now way surprises me that Dwight would go for Dark Horse. Probably go on some big rant about the over commercialization and trite narratives of DC and Marvel.

Author's Response: Yeah, sometimes the arguments just write themselves. Even the Dwight bits. Thanks! 

Feels like kind of a filler chapter here. Yes Jim's getting better at reading Pam so that's good to see. Still it's nice to see how Jim got set up in the house with Mark. A curious little tidbit there about Jim's folks and Larissa. Looks like a bit of Halpert family drama. Still an enjoyable story. Looking forward to seeing how thing go over with Pam showing up there at the end.

Author's Response: It is filler! But necessary filler I think. Thank you for reading, as always. 

Short and sweet but powerful. Seems like Pam's heart is a couple steps ahead of her mind here. I liked that she looks up and it seems that only then she notices that she's basically packed everything up in order to move out.

What I'm curious about is Penny saying leaving Roy "this time." This implies there have been other times Pam's shown up like this, Penny has expressed her disapproval of Roy, but Pam's gone back to him. Interesting tidbit there.

Also welcome to the baby-kicks-while-on-the-computer club.

Author's Response: Thank you! I think this is going to accelerate a little, but you're still right that Pam's not entirely caught up with her own heart yet. And yes, good catch on the tidbit--that's fleshed out a little (not a lot) in the next chapter.

I think this may have been the fastest I've seen you update a story in a good lone time. Not complaining in the slightest mind you. Really glad to see this one going.

Lots of introspection here, kind of. Part of me would have liked to have had the actual dialoge of Pam and Roy's fight, but still we got the jist of what was going on. Pam was trying to mend fences, Roy's a jerk, and hopefully this all spells the end of the Roy/Pam relationship in this universe.

I've got a feeling Angela didn't mean Roy when she said Pam's boyfriend was bleeding there at the end. Great job as always getting into the feelings of your characters.

Author's Response: Yeah, I've kind of fallen off the quick update wagon, I'll try to get back on (Thanksgiving permitting). Thanks for the comments! We're nearing the end, though it may take several actual updates to get all the emotional beats in there.

Nice job on the Micheal bluster. You got him portrayed nicely as a chicken-with-his-head-cut-off fluttering about.

As always I like how you've got Pam here. Her immediate concern over Jim and how's she's going to fix him up are heartwarming. So are those little tells, like how his voice is comforting to her. Keep paying attention to those kinds of things.

Looking forward to seeing more of the outcome of all these events.

Author's Response: The dominos will keep falling, never you fear! Thank you so much for the kind words.

Loved the Ego the Living Planet reference there. Great job slipping that in. I also love how Pam comes to all these realizations. That Roy is not the kind of man she wants to be with and more importantly she's not a doormat to just sit back and take it.

Wish I still had some jelly beans left to give to this story but I ran out a while ago.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm trying not to forget my Marvel!Pam along the way ;). Hope you keep enjoying even if you're out of beans (for which, thanks!).

"We, Miss Pamela=what's your last name"
"Morgan"

Whoops. I'm sure it's just an innocent typo. (wordo? is that a thing since the incorrect word IS spelled correctly, but it's the wrong word for what you meant)

I also like it that Jim's using this as an opportunity to get to know her more. Find out what she likes to do outside of work.

Yes, they are all sorts of adorable here. Pam's still kind of overthinking things, but her thinking is starting to head in the right direction at least. Nicely done.

What's also adorable is the continuation of their Marvel vs. DC debate. That's just so much fun. I can easily see in this world that once they finally get together they try and rope their kids into things, buying Marvel or DC clothes to send into the other one telling them to say something like "Look what Mommy got me!"

Author's Response: Oh good catch! I've edited that. Thanks for the support on both the general adorableness and the comics stuff. I always appreciate your careful eye!

Very cute. I think it's adorable that it seemed Jim was keyed up for the first apartment, but then it's the second one that fits so well. More and more thoughts from Pam's point of view about Jim and all good things. Nice way to get things set up for the future. Lovely chapter. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thank you! I think of Jim as really wanting her to end up in the one where he doesn't have to expose her to his past, but obviously that's the right one for her. 

Very good introspection here on Pam's part. I like that she's working on getting things squared away in her mind. OF course there's that nibbling fear in the back that her feelings for Jim are how you described them. But I doubt she'll give much credence to them what with all this thinking about things. As always I'm on pins and needles waiting for one of your updates.

Merry Christmas to you too. Hope you have a good one.

Author's Response: Thank you! I enjoy writing their introspection, especially around key decisions, so this is my favorite point in the story to write. Merry Christmas! Mine has been great so far, hope yours is too.

Wonderful way to wrap this up. Thank you so much for taking the whole Nerd!Pam thing and running with it like this. The way you wrote it added depth but also a lot of fun to their interactions. We all love classic JAM banter, but to have through the filter of Marvel vs. DC was really a treat. The last one here though with Captain Marvel vs Captain Marvel was a master stoke. I do like that even though it's a friendly debate, neither one really backs down. They know what they like, they'll stick to it. Of course they're, well in this case more Jim than Pam, also willing to explore the other studio a bit. To broaden horizons. Which of course is another great way to bring them closer together.

The other detail I liked it that glimpse into Pam's artist mind at the start. How she remembers the date by colors and how those colors make her feel. Lovely way to show how she thinks, not just what she thinks.

Yes it was kind of a slow burn to get to this point, but it was wonderful to see the development. Pam coming out of her shell some more, Jim finding his groove in this new world of Dunder-Mifflin. It was all just a ton of fun throughout.

Superb as always my friend. This one was a joy to read as it progressed.

Fortes Fortuna Adiuvat

Author's Response: I realized I never responded to this! Sorry for that. I always appreciate your detailed feedback, especially (for this one) on the Marvel!Pam elements. I'm glad those worked for you because they were a total blast to write. Thanks as ever for your incredibly valuable help in conceiving this through the prompting of your reviews. Si Quæris Peninsulam Amœnam Circumspice.