Penname: warrior4 Real name: Eric
Member Since: May 31, 2018

Bio:

Author of the Month March 2020

I've been writing fanfiction for awhile now. Just recently discovered The Office and figured I'd try my hand at that as well.

At first I thought of having all my stories in the same universe, but then I had some AU ideas. So any stories that occur within a common universe will be in a given series.


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Slow by agian18 Rated: MA [Reviews - 147] 157
Summary: Pam said she wanted to take things slow. So this is how it all goes down (in some cases, quite literally). The aforementioned, multi-chapter, essentially plotless smut-fest that I've been promising. Essentially smut for smut's sake, since we really saw next to nothing on air. Enjoy ;)
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 124215 Read Count: 146724 ePub Downloads: 127
[Report This] Published: April 14, 2018 Updated: April 29, 2021
Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: April 14, 2020 Title: Chapter 26: The One with the Summer Vacation Pt. 2

Love the idea of the huge Halpert family reunion. Though I do wonder where the army of Super Soaker toting kids disappeared off too? I have this vision of Jim using fake Army signals to send squads of kids everywhere and none of them knowing what he means. Lots of fun to see them having good clean fun together, as well as other kinds of fun too. And him giving her a shirt was just all sorts of sweet.

Love that they feel so comfortable in each other's spaces too. Also that Pam wanted to go through the trouble of making up the camping trip for him. Wonderful to see how they're looking out for each other like that. Nice in the tent imagery as well.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: April 10, 2020 Title: Chapter 25: The One With the Summer Vacation Pt. 1

Nothing wrong with several shorter trysts per chapter. Still as sensual and steamy as ever. Love how you show their connection even with all the sexiness surrounding everything. Wish I had more jellybeans for this but I ran out a long time ago.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: March 29, 2020 Title: Chapter 24: The One where Jim Pops His Phone Sex Cherry

Very steamy to be sure. I can only imagine what kind of hijinks they'd get into when she Pam does come back from Pratt. Great job as always AG.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: December 04, 2019 Title: Chapter 23: The One Where Jim's Hungry for the Wrong Thing

As always with this story, you make is so easy to envision what's going on with Jim and Pam. Not just their actions, but their headspace as well. I do think it was kind of funny that Jim walked in thinking she was just messing around with him and just goes for the fridge. That Pam gets up and demands that he take control of her like that? Well I for one love seeing Pam still just going after what she wants.

The end there where they're starting to talk about kids and more permanent family is the sweet icing on the cake that adds a nice balance to everything else.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: May 30, 2019 Title: Chapter 21: The One with Jim’s Lil’ Dainty Fingers

Story time. So I'm at work one night getting my ambulance all checked out. Making sure we have enough supplies on hand, the batteries are charged, so on and so forth. I hop in the cab to start up the computer when my partner calls forward to ask what size medical gloves I prefer. I say small and he tosses up a box. When he got in the drivers seat he gave me crap for wanting small gloves as I'm one of the few if only guy at the station that uses that size. My response; "My wife has no complaints," which quite effectively shut him up. So I'm 100% with Jim here.

In other regards it's also nice to see Jim and Pam out doing normal couple type things, even if they (he) literally can't keep their hands off each other (her). Ryan can go suck an egg of course. Great job as always.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: May 26, 2019 Title: Chapter 20: The One With the Snow Day Pt. 2

Oh stop hiding all the time. I mean I know you just got a computer again and all, but seriously. How many times have I and everyone else told you how great this story is. But of course you know that and I'm sure beyond all the calls for holy water you're back there smirking at how much fun you're having writing this.

Considering how long it's been since we've gotten an update (not blaming you there, just pointing out a fact) this more that makes up for the hiatus. Great job.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: January 01, 2019 Title: Chapter 18: The One with the New Year's Fireworks

Now that's the way to welcome in the New Year. Who cares if there were fireworks in any given city, Jim and Pam had plenty of their own. Lots of fun to see all these holiday chapters for sure.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: June 27, 2018 Title: Chapter 8: The One With the East German Laundry Detergent

Sorry it's taken me so long to write a review for this story. It's turning into one of my favorite guilty pleasure stories to dive into. The back and forth banter they have is great as well as their clear love for each other. Very clear descriptions that make it easy to see what they're up to.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: December 26, 2018 Title: Chapter 17: The One That's Merry and Bright

Very sexy way for Jim and Pam to reconnect after what sounds like a crazy holiday time for them. Descriptive as always. I really like that Pam set up just a nice quiet evening for them before the real action began. Oftentimes it's moments like that, that show how special a relationship can be and this one turned out great.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: November 22, 2018 Title: Chapter 16: The Thankful One

This was a ton of fun. From the restrained formallity of Thanksgiving with Meemaw to the party that was the Halpert clan gathering. Like I said in a previous review, it's great to see that you're bringing out the characters in this story. Yes the smut is what draws one in, but once there the characters are the ones who add depth.

Happy Thanksgiving, hope you don't have to bad of a hangover.

Author's Response:

I’m glad that this smut fest can have an actual story line that connects with people. It makes me feel less heathen-like. 

I also appreciate the hangover wishes. We all good. Now, for thanksgiving part two.... 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: October 01, 2018 Title: Chapter 15: The One with the Big Fat Lie and the Jolly Green Giant

Don't you dare apologize! Beyond the all the sex are very real characters. The best relationships mean putting effort into them. That's what I've been seeing with this entire story. The sexiness is hot and steamy, but it's also a very real way of showing just how close a couple can become when they're truly intimate with each other. The way you've got things going here shows that sex can be used for more than just playful fun, it can be used to heal and unequivocally show the depths of commitment two people can have. Bravo on that.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: September 24, 2018 Title: Chapter 14: The One with the Quiet Place Knock-Off

This is one of, if not the best, "pushing the beds together at the farm," stories I've read. Well done AG. With so much angst that there is in the early JAM relationship, it's always great to see that they truly are meant for each other. Fics like this one, even though it makes one want to drown in holy water like you said, do so that relationship. Keep it coming.

Author's Response: Aww, Warrior, you're making me blush!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: August 19, 2018 Title: Chapter 13: The One with the Honeymoon Stage Pt. 2

I love how you've got them so very sweet together. Ah young love. This story has become like a fine wine, it's only getting better with age. We're past exploring the vintage to see if it's a good year or not. Finding it to be of exceptional quality the case has been bought and laid in the cellar to rest and mature. As each bottle is brought forth in time the notes that were there in the first tasting continue to entrance, while the newer notes that can only be brought about with time are being detected in the tasting. Salud.

Author's Response: I'm not sure what to make of the fact that your review is more elegant than half of my entire story, but thank you so much. Now I want wine.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: August 14, 2018 Title: Chapter 12: The One with the Honeymoon Stage Pt. 1

Wow! You've really got those two insatiable for each other don't you? Making up for lost time I suppose. Still all very hot and sexy even if not as graphic as before. Always a treat to see a new update on this one.

Author's Response: I mean, are they *not* insatiable for one another anyway? ;) 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: August 07, 2018 Title: Chapter 11: The One Where They Have Sex Pt. 2

Once you get the hang of bouncing between the two POV's I think it worked well. Saves having line breaks to switch POV's or having to write two chapters for each one. That said wonderfully detailed and descriptive. Lots of good internal thoughts that made it all so very sweet and sensual. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: I'm glad it eventually worked, ha. I figured since I've been generally bouncing between them, with the occasional third person thrown in, we'd want to hear from both of them on their first--erm, second--time. Thanks for sticking with me! :)

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: July 22, 2018 Title: Chapter 10: The One Where They Have Sex Pt. 1

Sexy, sweet, sensual, loving, pick your adjective. Excellently written. Looking forward to seeing what else these two get up to. ;)

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: July 03, 2018 Title: Chapter 9: The One That Sounds Like Freshman Year English Class

Is you or them that are going to be burning up here soon? I can't help but feel that you've got something long and hard planned to build up to the climax of this story and beyond. ;) Sorry, couldn't resist.
Anyway, adding my own two cents in, out in the woods just off a public hiking trail behind some bushes.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: January 24, 2019 Title: Chapter 19: The One With the Snow Day: Pt. 1

Now that's the way to kick off a snow day. There a few shots of Jim and Pam in late afternoon light in the show after they've gotten together. A lot of times in those shots Pam especially seems to be glowing. That's the image I gather was going on here. Them both softly lit up by firelight, while they play on the couch. Very sensual when one also thinks about everything else that was going on. Looking forward to seeing what they get up to during the rest of the snow day.

Summary:

Safe and Sound Cover

Life as they knew it is over. Everything has been and can be taken away in the blink of an eye. Despite this, they found each other. But can they ever find home?

Inspired by A Quiet Place.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Angela, Dwight, Jim, Jim/Pam, Larissa Halpert, Pam, Roy, Ryan
Genres: Drama, Romance, Suspense
Warnings: Explicit sexual content, Mild sexual content, Other Adult Theme, Possible Triggers, Secondary Character Death, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 56650 Read Count: 16848 ePub Downloads: 11
[Report This] Published: April 15, 2018 Updated: June 05, 2021
Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: June 05, 2021 Title: Chapter 12: Day 383

Yeah more than worth the wait. Everything about this was in a word perfect. There's nothing else to say about it. Just wonderful.

Author's Response: Thank you warrior :D

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: September 25, 2019 Title: Chapter 11: Day 376

Quite the roller coaster with this chapter. The first parts with Pam and Penny add a lot to the sense of dread Pam is feeling here. Considering everything going on in this world and those kinds of experiences she's had, it makes complete sense she'd be so anxious about everything.

The dread they felt as Dwight led them out of the farm was well placed too. Often times it's what we imagine that is more scary than anything that could really happen. While I'm hear it was heartbreaking to hear more about Ben and Mose. Everyone has lost loved ones in this world. You really make the reader feel for Dwight and Angela there.

Great way to give Jim and Pam somewhere to let themselves be heard. Not just with their voices, though that was touching. They're also letting their feelings be heard in a variety of ways.

To wrap it all up with a proposal was very sweet. Great job as always.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: November 17, 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Day 327

Lots going on here. Jim and Pam being in love is great fun, and your descriptions are wonderful. Very easy to see in the minds eye everything they're getting into, >;)

The added backstory is nice too. Give a lot more perspective on how things came to be where they are. The trick with the radio is promising too. It'll be interesting to see how that pans out.

Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: October 25, 2018 Title: Chapter 8: Day 263: Evening

So I've finally gotten around to reading this. Wow. Granted I haven't seen "AQP" so I looked up the synopsis online and I think I get most of what you're referring to. However I've loved how you've woven elements of "The Office" into this tale. Very vivid descriptions of everything. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: May 22, 2019 Title: Chapter 10: Day 374

Jim's dream about Larissa was a little heartbreaking, however it did give some nice foreshadowing without giving anything away. Same goes for Angela's story. Everyone in this world has lost someone they've loved. You're doing a great job at exploring how people deal with that loss.

Now however, Jim and Pam have found something. Not only their love for each other, but a new life. I know they're both scared right now. For good reason too. However I get the feeling that this time Jim with maybe some help from a a certain beet farmer will be able to protect those they care about.

Glad you were able to update. Now like I said in a chat a while back, you can reward yourself by getting caught up on all the other wonderful fics being posted right now.

Author's Response: Yes, as far as post-apocalypse teams go Dwight is a first round pick ;-) Thanks for reviewing!

Summary: Past Featured Story

NOW COMPLETE! Jim gets in an accident on June 10, and Pam gets to help. Only AU in that it deviates from main timeline between S2 and S3 (no different worldbuilding premise).

Disclaimer: I do not own the Office or its IP.

Challenges Challenge Entry Q2 2018


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Helene Beesly, Jan, Jim, Jim/Pam, Larissa Halpert, Other, Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Inner Monologue, Romance, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: Violence/Injury
Challenges: Hospital JAM, Sister Sister
Series: None
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63095 Read Count: 109795 ePub Downloads: 31
[Report This] Published: May 20, 2018 Updated: July 21, 2018
Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: July 07, 2018 Title: Chapter 43: June 13: Simultaneously with the Previous

Aww, the teapot card. I imagine the next chapter is going to be all cute and fluffy. Nothing wrong with that at all. Still being kind of new to the fandom, I don't think I've read any other fics where an author wrote out their version of what the card said. It'll be interesting to see for sure. As always, looking forward what comes next.

Author's Response: I'll admit to cuteness and fluff. There's a lot of fics that do this with the card, though I think most are much older, circa the time the Christmas episode first aired. I recommend checking them out!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: July 08, 2018 Title: Chapter 44: June 13: The Note

That was very sweet. I can very easily see that what you've written here was what was written on the Teapot Card. It was interesting to see all of Pam's mental gymnastics leading up to reading it too. It's always interesting to see what's going on in their heads. I wish I had more jellybeans to give, but I'm all jellybean'ed out on this story.

Author's Response: Thanks! I've thought a lot about the card, so I'm really glad my version made sense to you. Thanks for your consistently valuable feedback on this story.