Ok so I realize you wrote this in 2008? And it’s 2018 so there’s a huge chance you won’t even see this review but wow. This was amazing and actually made me very emotional as a woman. I think sex is kind of a tricky thing and most boys are very selfish when it comes to women and orgasms because they don’t think about what their partner wants but then you eventually be with men who care and are like Jim and that’s when it’s great and you know that person is right for you. The way you wrote all of that was just honestly so real and amazing so thank you.

Author's Response: WestonFollower, it HAS been a long time but I still got a notification for this review and it made my day! I’m so glad you enjoyed this story — it was a challenging and very real one to write. So often in fic (and definitely in some of my other stories), satisfying sex comes so easily (TWSS) to characters and frankly that’s a bit unbelievable. So this one was an attempt at a more realistic sexual relationship. (Also, my first traditionally published novel came out last year — if you liked my writing, you might enjoy it! It’s called ZENN DIAGRAM and is available at Amazon and Barnes & Noble and probably some other places, too. My real life author name is Wendy Brant. I’m also posting a dystopian story on Wattpad called THE SWAILING, if you want to check it out — that one is free! Thanks again for the review! It’s wonderful to know people are still reading these stories occasionally. Writing fic was such an important part of my writing journey!

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This is soooooo good I’m hooked