Reviewer: Robert Dunder Signed
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Date: August 05, 2021
Title: Chapter 2: Temptation, the very thing that held her back
"She didn’t think Jim had noticed. Thank god." - Sure keep telling yourself that, Pam. If Jim does feel a certain way about her, he definitely would have noticed it.
By the way, I love this universe where they're both out there, living their dreams (somewhat). It's just an amazing little tidbit. I also love how they're supportive of each other even if their interests do not exactly match.
I don't know if I'm reading it wrong but I'm really liking Katy in this story. She seems like a normal girlfriend? And it kind of goes in line with canon since she was kind of nice in the three episodes she was in. I hope the inevitable (??) breakup won't be too heartbreaking. Roy can go jump off a cliff. What a dick.
Erin reminds me of that coworker you would just love to smack on the head.
Alan the cartoonist! Will he try not to be edgy?
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Jim and Pam supporting each other is always something I love. And no, I'm totally with you on Katy - I thought she seemed nice in the episodes so I didn't want to do her down here. So I don't think she's as bad as I've written Roy (but that doesn't necessarily mean she's right for Jim...)
Haha, Erin is definitely that coworker! And lol - more on Alan's edginess (or not) is coming.
Thanks so much for reading and your review!