Penname: flamingosinparadise Real name:
Member Since: January 01, 2007

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Summary:

A few fuzzy, fluffy one-shots that form a loosely connected story. Based around the idea of this quote by Germaine Greer:

"The essence of pleasure is spontaneity."

 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Oneshot, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5506 Read Count: 27273 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: July 19, 2007 Updated: July 24, 2007
Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed
Date: August 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: More Satisfying Than Snickers

Oh that sneaky Pam. 

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed
Date: August 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Fear and Loathing in Scranton

Awww...big question: will they be getting hitched in Vegas?  Hum...

 Very cute.  I like Ryan being more of a prick now that ever.  Seems right.

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed
Date: August 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Waitress in the Sky

Oh Jim...that didn't take too much convincing there, did it?  

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Date: August 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Lazy River: Scranton Style

Haha...love the use of the word "hussy" and love that Jim is refering to Pam as one.  And now you've made me want to go to a pool with a lazy river.  Sigh...

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed
Date: August 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Casino Night Redux

Lovely way of weaving Casino Night in there.  Love that they both thought of it (obviously...I would to and I didn't "live" it like they did).

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed
Date: August 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Souvenirs

Awww...I was wondering if this was going to happen!  I love that he just blurted it out but didn't back down.  Lovely.

 And that clock is even more hideous than I imagined.

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed
Date: August 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: No Regrets

This was a lovely little story, sorry for the crappy little reviews.  I'm glad they didn't go through with the wedding because I think they can do better than a Vegas wedding, after all the waiting they've done.  (Loved Jim's line about that).  

Everything you write (that I've read at least) is just so lovely and wonderful...I don't know how you do it. 

Summary: The documentary about life in Dunder Mifflin Scranton is on the air and fast approaching the second season series finale. The Powers That Be (TPTB) have a great idea to boost the ratings (and hopefully paper sales).
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Humor, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content, Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15924 Read Count: 21128 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: July 25, 2007 Updated: September 05, 2007
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Date: August 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Behind Closed Doors

Wow...very interesting concept....I never would have guessed that's who Samantha is.  (I was thinking more, to try and get them to dress more fasionably or something).  While I hope they don't have the documentary actually show on the show soon, I love stories where it has because it's so different, but still the same, as the show.  I hope you understand what I mean by that.

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed
Date: August 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Let's Get It On

Hum...I'm thinking Jim's wrong and that Pam is going to do it.  You have me very intrigued.  

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Date: August 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Hot Child in the City

Wow...this whole thing really leads to some uncomfortable coversations.  I feel so bad for Jim because that would just be so...weird for him.  I wonder what Jan will say...

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed
Date: August 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: I Want You to Want Me

=(  Now I think I am more sad for Pam.  Great reasoning with Michael...very believeable that he would think like that.  And great line about Michael, Phyliss, and maracas.  Very Michael.  

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed
Date: August 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Walk on the Wild Side

Awww...I'm glad they were able to compromise.  Now...what will Angela do??  Great Creed line in there with the nudity...of course.  Can't wait to read more!  (I've been spoiled in being behind because I can read to much at once.)

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed
Date: September 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Good Girls Don't

Oh Moxie, way to be sneaking.  I am shocked Angela signed...or she only did after the announcement.  Jim & Pam are too cute with their VS related banter.  Love Todd Packer getting caught.  Oh and great job with the Toby/Michael dynamic.  They hate was very well done.

The Real Deal by Colette Rated: M [Reviews - 45] 30
Summary: Past Featured Story

A first fight and a bowl of make-up spaghetti. (No spoilers.)

 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot, Romance, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2405 Read Count: 7577 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: July 26, 2007 Updated: July 26, 2007
Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed
Date: August 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this just for the fact they can't really remember what started it but everything keeps escalating...not because that happens from time to time around here or anything.  I love how simple yet true to life this is.  Very nice.

Author's Response: Yeah, that never happens around here either...was a real stretch just to imagine it ;-) Very pleased you thought it seemed true to life; somehow these simple moments just appeal to me to write about (maybe I'm plot challenged, LOL?) Thanks much for taking the time to review, flamingosinparadise!

Summary: Past Featured Story

How Jim became a 28-year-old virgin.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Humor, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11710 Read Count: 22849 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 02, 2007 Updated: August 18, 2007
Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed
Date: August 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yougot me interested in this after your question about it on the boards...I definitely agree that it is possible and I'm very anxious to read what you came up with for his reasons!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed
Date: August 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: High School

Awww...that sounds like a sweet relationship...and vaguely similar to S2 Jim & Pam (minus the kissing).  I like how you described her looks...because it's like Pam again.  Man...my reviews are boring.  

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Date: August 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: College

Awww...poor Jim trying to propose and getting it mostly wrong.  So far you are presenting a good arguement...

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed
Date: August 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Katy

Makes sense that there would be no sex if it's just on and off like you have here (since it was never really specified on the show).  And now you have me really curious about the Karen story.  

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed
Date: August 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Karen

Awww...that's a cute end to the chapter.  I am surprised that you were able to make each of these stories believeable and different from each other.  Very impressive.  And Karen's story fits in quite well with what we know from the show.  Very nice.

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed
Date: August 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Finally

What a nice ending for Jim.  =)  The smut wasn't too cheesy (I wouldn't even be able to write any).  Thanks for writing this story to show a different perspective!

Summary: Past Featured StoryPost season three finale. Pam, Jim, a train.

Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Inner Monologue, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 745 Read Count: 6005 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 04, 2007 Updated: August 04, 2007
Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed
Date: August 17, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow.  How can you turn something as mundane and sometimes annoying as a train outside the window and make it something so beautiful??    

And why is Pam's alarm clock taped down?? 

Summary: Past Featured StoryDinner, and what happened later. Post-Season 3.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jan, Jim/Pam, Kelly, Michael
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8226 Read Count: 56276 ePub Downloads: 7
[Report This] Published: August 06, 2007 Updated: August 26, 2007
Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed
Date: August 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Changes

I like that you are writing with the challenge of none of the distractions you mentioned. (not that there is anything wrong with the stories that have them because I read and enjoyed those too) but it will be nice to see a fresh take and I love your stories.  Will this one have the barn dance?  haha.

Author's Response: No barn dances, flamingosinparadise, although I am considering a lovely hoe-down at the Schrute establishment for a different story.  I like stories with those distractions too (and I've written many of them myself).

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed
Date: August 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Interruption

Awww...I feel worst for Michael...what is he going to do?  So nice of Pam to sacrifice their first date to help him.  It doesn't even make me sad.

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed
Date: August 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Axis

Ha!  Love the note from Michael and the fact he sent champagne.  Love Jim's "I wasn't going to do that" without being able to come up with a reason.  Very nice.

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed
Date: August 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Drive

How can you make something as simple as climbing the stairs so hot?  I don't know how you do it.  I loved Jim's line: "Yes doesn't begin to cover it".  Very much looking forward to that apartment action.

P.S. Your end notes crack me up. 



Author's Response: Apartment action, as ordered, flamingosinparadise.  Thank you!