I really liked this. I actually think it's a lot more realistic than what we've seen on the show. But that's because the show has to come up with some way to keep Jim and Pam at Dunder Mifflin, which really doesn't seem like something that they would do outside of the show's constraints. Anyway, nice job on this. It's really well written and made for a good Saturday-morning, still-in-bed read. I'm not sure if your target audience was lazy people who don't feel like accomplishing anything until at least noon, but it worked for me. ;)