Reviewer: SharpSchruter Signed 7
Date: April 29, 2007
Title: Chapter 1: The Trust Bubble
Very enjoyable so far. I love how you've captured their feelings for each other and how it's very easy to imagine. Not so sure about the Roy thing, I feel like he's able to let her move on and wouldn't react in such ways, but ot each his own. Nice!
Author's Response:
oh no, roy didn't do anything really. Most of it was on Paul, cause he's an ass. In the chapter, I never actually blamed Roy, Jim was mostly pissed because of Roy's presence, but I never really said why Roy was there.
I think he would let her move on, but her brother Paul is an ass, and maybe in a way Roy might like the fact Jim doesn't get to have that part of Pam. And I actually set this in the near future because I still wanted wounds to kind of be opened. Thanks for the imput though!