Penname: thisis_urgent Real name: Chloe
Member Since: April 25, 2007

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"To Amsterdam!"
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Fathers and Daughters. Women and Men. by Stablergirl Rated: M [Reviews - 250] 86
Summary: Past Featured Story

Member's Choice - “My father died, so I’ll need a few days.” She explained in an unaffected sounding voice that surprised even herself. The three other parties in the room were stunned into silence. Jim spoke first. “Jesus, Pam…” She stood with her back to him and addressed Michael as if Jim had not made a sound…as if Jim did not exist. It was the only way.


Categories: Alternate Universe, Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst, Childhood, Inner Monologue, Romance, Travel
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40335 Read Count: 157663 ePub Downloads: 42
[Report This] Published: April 20, 2007 Updated: June 03, 2007
Reviewer: thisis_urgent Signed
Date: May 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: How is New York?

so good. so, so good. 

Reviewer: thisis_urgent Signed 9
Date: May 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 16: It was Tuesday.

i love your style & sense of the characters.  i'm not gonna lie; sometimes this story can get a little dramatic - but i really like it that way.  you write so well, it doesn't matter. i loved the ghost of pam's dad staring at jim - in any other story, i would have thought it was dramatic, but it was so touching & real when i read it.

more soon, i hope. 



Author's Response: lol I know.  I try to make it more metaphor so that it isn't soooo dramatic.  But hey it is what it is ;-)  Thanks for the review!!

After Hours (the fight) by sweetchariots Rated: MA [Reviews - 4] 2
Summary: It's after hours the day of "The Fight". Pam is feeling guilty for shunning Jim at the dojo. So, she decides to make it up to him. 
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Steamy
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3560 Read Count: 10851 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: June 10, 2007 Updated: June 10, 2007
Reviewer: thisis_urgent Signed 10
Date: June 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So good.  So, so good.

I've been getting annoyed with the dialogue in fics lately, but this was perfect.  So in character.  I loved it. 



Author's Response: Thanks so much! This is my second attempt at writing, well anything really! I'm a little Office obsessed, and writing this story (and my first one, After Hours Women's Appreciation) helps to burn off some of that energy. It's just a bonus that someone actually enjoys it! :)