"It seems odd, in the ironic, slap-in-the-face kind of way that since her incident, it’s been easier to let him go."
Something bad happens to Pam. Very Dark.
10 Hello,
I know how annoying it is when people say this, but please update soon :)
Thank you
Jim and Pam have 24 hours together before he leaves for Stamford. A lot can happen when you're on borrowed time.10 Hi!
PLEASE DON'T STOP! i meant to review earlier but i'd forgotten my password, i completely love your story! Please keep going!
10 I only found your story tonight and i'm ADDICTED. I can't wait for your next update! It's amazing. I love everything about it. I can't find words eloquent enough to express my adoration for you and this story! Also, i hope your allergic reaction has cleared up!
Author's Response:
Addicted?!?!? Thanks so much!
I'm not quite cleared up but my head is smaller. I've been looking like a bobblehead. Now I merely look like someone took an obese person's face and plopped it on top of my body. Seriously. I've lost 75 lbs in the last 18 months and my face now looks like it did in early 2007. Still, it's an improvement, I guess...
Thank you for taking the time to leave a review. I really, really appreciate your kind words.
LOL I'm Australian, and i can honestly say i've NEVER heard Seppo or 'within cooee' (i've heard cooee, it's a call you make in the bush, i guess if you're lost) before. And some of the others i've only heard in extreme moderation!
Author's Response:
Oh, well! Steve really DID call me a seppo – several times! Really! And I knew I was going out on a limb with the others, since I was relying entirely on an Aussie slang dictionary. Come to think of it, although most of the Australians we met did use a lot of slang, Steve was the worst. And he actually tried to sell me on some story sweepers on the Harbor Bridge ... that shortly before rush hour, they'd close the bridge and "sweepers" would cross the bridge swinging brooms or some such to get the 'roos off! My husband actually thought it was plausible! Oy. I had an artist friend draw a cartoon of the sweepers and framed it for Steve as a thank you gift that I gave him on Anzac Day.
What the hay – hopefully, you're the only one who will know!
Two days after the Booze Cruise...what might've happened if Jim had confessed sooner.This is AMAZING, I LOVE it! So much so that i started reading it and couldn't stop and it's now 2.18 in the morning!
I had more to say, some specific points, but it's now 2.19am and words and clear thought elude me. Well done, thanks!!!