Penname: larrymcg Real name: Larry McGillicuddy
Member Since: May 28, 2007

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Summary: "I hope the war goes on forever and Ryan gets drafted." An Office M*A*S*H AU.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4962 Read Count: 3269 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 12, 2006 Updated: July 12, 2006
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: July 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, this was perfectly done, from beginning to end. All of the character replacements make perfect sense, and it had a very poignant ending. Outstanding!

Summary: Past Featured StoryPost-"Gay Witch Hunt"; Pam's growing up and realizing that if you want something, sometimes you have to fight for it.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 128465 Read Count: 418373 ePub Downloads: 126
[Report This] Published: September 23, 2006 Updated: September 23, 2007
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: June 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

This was a terrific chapter. Managed to be both sweet and sexy. Can't wait for the conclusion.

Baby Talk by LoveFool Rated: K [Reviews - 438] 122
Summary:

More Jim and Pam and their adventures in raising baby Jill!


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Humor, Married, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: Baby Talk
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 96586 Read Count: 204345 ePub Downloads: 12
[Report This] Published: November 19, 2006 Updated: March 03, 2010
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: June 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 15: The Best Daddy

This was great. I think you write Jam fluff better than just about anyone else.

Pick Up Lines by LoveFool Rated: T [Reviews - 20] 8
Summary: Past Featured StoryThis is a companion piece to my alternate universe series. Instant Message format like Mixed Messages (only its set before they're married. They are dating/engaged in this one). Enjoy!
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Romance, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: Baby Talk
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2143 Read Count: 5542 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 04, 2007 Updated: January 04, 2007
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: June 08, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Pick Up Lines

This is by far the most addictive story on the site. I can't read it enough. Great job!

The Balloon by nqllisi Rated: K [Reviews - 22] 11
Summary: Past Featured StoryPam's mom remembers.
Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Other, Pam
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Pam's Mom
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 500 Read Count: 3240 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 10, 2007 Updated: January 10, 2007
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: June 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Just found this. Beautiful story!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you, larrymcg! I think the last year must have been rough for anyone who loves Pam- but I'll bet Mama Beesly is very proud of her little girl right now!

Summary: Finally, the Lost/Office crossover fic I've been working on. Don't be scared if you don't watch Lost! I'm trying to write it so that you can read this whether you watch that show or not.

Categories: Crossover, Other
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language, Other Adult Theme, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2194 Read Count: 1365 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 06, 2007 Updated: February 13, 2007
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed
Date: June 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: 8.

This is great! Get to work on Chapter 3!

Summary: Past Featured Story

You spend your days watching other people fumble over themselves and wade through life without having to actually live your own.

Response to the Documentary Crew challenge!


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Karen, Other, Pam
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: Adult language
Challenges: The Documentary Crew
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1959 Read Count: 4980 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: March 12, 2007 Updated: March 12, 2007
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed
Date: June 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Lights, Camera, Action

Excellent job! That's definitely one of my favorite Tim/Dawn moments too.

Summary: Past Featured StoryMember's Choice - Pam thought she was throwing these letters away. But what happens when your garbage doesn't stay in the garbage? Set mid-season 3.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Other, Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 47299 Read Count: 182163 ePub Downloads: 33
[Report This] Published: March 25, 2007 Updated: April 01, 2008
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: July 28, 2007 Title: Chapter 16: after a deep sleep

A most excellent chapter! I really love this story. Can't wait for the conclusion.



Author's Response:

Yay! I finally made it to your review! I've been looking forward to responding just so I could say this:

four score and... seven (days) ago, I, your author, was brought forth upon a most excellent adventure conceived by my new friends Bill...and Ted. These two great gentlemen are dedicated to a proposition which was true in my time, just as it's true today. Be excellent to each other. And...PARTY ON DUDES!!!

Okay sorry, I think I've fulfilled my loser geekiness quota for the day.

In other news, thank you for a most excellent review! Please ignore me while I slink away in shame... 

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Anywhere But Here cover

Role Reversal Challenge: It's May 2006. Jim's wedding is approaching and a lovelorn Pam can't take much more. Starts during Casino Night (or an AU version of it).


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Humor, Romance, Travel, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Challenges: Role Reversal
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44755 Read Count: 80863 ePub Downloads: 23
[Report This] Published: April 15, 2007 Updated: February 27, 2018
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed
Date: June 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Bet I could really lose myself up there

I'm really enjoying this. It's a great concept and you're doing it justice. Can't wait for more!


Author's Response: Thank you very much, I get really nervous when I update this one for some reason. Maybe I'm just worried people will say, "Oh this and that wouldn't happen in this situation". But it a fun concept to write about and it makes me happy to know I'm doing it justice.

Summary:

After a fire destroys her apartment, Pam moves in with Jim and Karen. Everyone has to find out how they define "friendship". Not for those who prefer their Jim to be wholesome.

 


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst, Claustrophobic Spaces, Steamy
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4076 Read Count: 8105 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 03, 2007 Updated: June 29, 2007
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: June 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Two

Please continue this. I'm really interested to see where you're going with this.

Summary:

An inevitable conversation following Beach Games.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10275 Read Count: 39496 ePub Downloads: 6
[Report This] Published: May 14, 2007 Updated: June 06, 2007
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 9
Date: June 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: The Confrontation

Really enjoying this whole story. Keep it up!

Stolen by girl7 Rated: M [Reviews - 169] 62
Summary:

Inspired by the finale and the seasons that preceeded it.  Enough said.


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21030 Read Count: 69197 ePub Downloads: 26
[Report This] Published: May 17, 2007 Updated: July 06, 2007
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: June 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: You are the best one of the best ones

Wow, that was a pretty intense chapter. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

Is it stupid that I'm honored to get a review from the person who started the fanfic thread over on TWoP? :o)  (BTW - my time has been ridiculously, stuipdly limited lately, so I'm amassing this great big list of fics to read, and yours is definitely on it; I keep hearing such great things about it!)

Thanks for reviewing, and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: July 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: We all look like we feel

Really great job here. I love how you incorporate the deleted scene from Booze Cruise. I always thought that scene makes more sense why he abruptly breaks up with Katy. You also did a great job of navigating the uncomfortable moments in their discussion. It felt very realistic.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much.  You know, I watched the show from season one, the very beginning (thanks to my husband), but didn't get truly fascinated (read: obsessed) by it until the Booze Cruise episode.  I didn't breathe for the last ten minutes of Casino Night -- was just too shocked, really, to even react.  But when I got the DVD and saw that deleted scene from the Booze Cruise episode, I  just burst into tears at the look on his face. I really, really wish they hadn't cut it (though I completely understand why they did - after all, it is a comedy). 

But that moment is, in my opinion, one of Jim's most defining moments as a character.  All this rambling to say that I'm really glad it resonated for you here -- and glad to hear that you enjoyed the chapter in total.  As I mentioned in a previous response, I've been sitting on this chapter for quite some time because I just couldn't get it "right."  I finally posted it tonight (even though I had reservations) because I've started working on something new, so it's really, really thrilling to get positive feedback on it. 

Summary:

Jim asks Pam out after his return from NYC. Will it be the perfect first date or will their nerves get the best of them?


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19498 Read Count: 48967 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: May 24, 2007 Updated: June 13, 2007
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: June 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: Three Words

What a perfect conclusion! Great job!



Author's Response: Thank you and thanks for reading! I appreciate it!

Cliche by Wendy Blue Rated: T [Reviews - 83] 37
Summary: Past Featured StoryA series of vignettes centered around clichés, but with a JAM spin.

Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10899 Read Count: 41902 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 26, 2007 Updated: July 22, 2007
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: July 03, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: Another Notch in Your Belt

Another great chapter of this wonderful story. So sweet. Thanks for this.

Author's Response: And thank you for the review!  Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: July 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: The Best Thing Since Sliced Bread

How happy was I to receive a "favorite story update" e-mail and see it was this one. Awesome.

I love that Jim even got Angela in on the plan. Great job as always!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Three years have passed since Pam left Scranton for New York, and Jim is still very much on her mind.  Will a work-related trip to Rome, Italy be the catalyst that reunites Pam with Jim once and for all? 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Humor, Inner Monologue, Romance, Travel
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22531 Read Count: 68824 ePub Downloads: 12
[Report This] Published: May 27, 2007 Updated: July 02, 2007
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: June 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: What if I Loved You?

This was an amazing chapter. It was so good "I got goosebumps." Seriously, your description of the scenery really makes it come alive for a very romantic setting. Can't wait for more!



Author's Response: Oh wow!!  Goosebumps?  That's quite the compliment!  Thank you so much.  I'm happy to hear that you're enjoying the story!

Reviewer: larrymcg Signed
Date: June 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Flying

This keeps getting better and better. It's very impressive how much research and effort you've put into this story.  Great job!

Author's Response: Wow!  Thanks so much.  The research was just a blast since I'm such a history geek- a ton of fun and actually pretty interesting (for me anyway! LOL).  Thanks for reviewing and for reading my chapters.  You've been so awesome rec'ing my fic at TWoP!

Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: June 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Which One Will The Fountain Bless?

Another great chapter. I love the note of anticipation you leave us on. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading, for reviewing and for pimping my fic on TWoP!  It's awesome to hear from readers what they think of the chapters.

Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: July 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Epilogue (The World Begins Again)

This part made me laugh:

"Pick me up a McFlurry if you choose to not to turn right.”

This was a perfect conclusion to a wonderful story. You really did a terrific job on this whole thing. It's definitely one of the best fanfic stories I've read. I can't wait to see what you will work on next!



Author's Response:

I'm excited to hear that you enjoyed the story. Thank you for the wonderful messages you've left here and at TWoP, I truly appreciate them. 

Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: June 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Many Faces of Facebook

I'm really enjoying this story. Keep it up!


Author's Response: Thanks so much!  I hope you continue to read and enjoy.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Summary: Past Featured StoryAU After the merger.  Pam learns the dreams Jim had before Dunder Mifflin and why he had to abandon them.  Will it change how she feels about him?
Categories: Present, Alternate Universe
Characters: Dwight, Jim/Pam, Karen, Roy
Genres: Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21108 Read Count: 43808 ePub Downloads: 6
[Report This] Published: May 31, 2007 Updated: July 04, 2007
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed
Date: June 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Can't wait to see what Karen is up to. I love the way you write Larissa. She's a great mom.



Author's Response: Larissa is a lot of fun.  Hope you like the bit with her in this chapter.  Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: larrymcg Signed
Date: July 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great conclusion to an excellent story. I really enjoyed this. Thanks!

Reviewer: larrymcg Signed
Date: June 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I just got caught up with this story. and I really like it. It's interesting to see how the Office characters interact in a more dramatic setting. Looking forward to more!



Author's Response: Glad you like it and thanks for reviewing.  I wanted to try something a little more "grown up" but hopefully it's in the spirit of the show.

The Wedding by Azlin Rated: K [Reviews - 18] 8
Summary: The Halperts attend a wedding and fluffety-fluff-fluff of the sweetest variety ensues.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam, Other
Genres: Fluff, Married
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: Pigtails, Tickle Fights, and Secret Recipes
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1888 Read Count: 3763 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: June 01, 2007 Updated: June 01, 2007
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: June 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Love You This Much

Very nice and sweet story. You nailed the JAM interaction and I felt bad for poor Kelly.

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad it still felt in character for Jam even so far into the future. :)