I was ready to die at the beginning of this, because I thought--WHAT? PAM AND ROY? BABY? NO!--but then I just melted at the end when it was Jim and Pam ugh I can't wait until they're pregnant because I just imagine Jim as being the most awestruck, attentive, amazing father-to-be ever. I loved this, good job!

Ugh, Charles Miner. What a...well, nevermind.

I loved the dinosaur story. It was a really great way to get a peek into Jim's mind, to see how he must have felt that day. Your characterization was perfect, too. Really great, I loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks so much BigTuna, I\'m glad I got Jim right, that\'s great to hear. I may or may not have been a dinosaur nerd myself.

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Aleja;lskjdflaksjf.

Sorry. That's how I usually review.

I already said all of this, but so so so so so so so cute!! I loved it. But you knew that already. Gah. I don't know why you were so nervous, because this really is terrific. Seriously.

And I'm glad to have helped out. =)

Author's Response: And now thank you for the real review. Now that I have been bitten by the writing bug, I am contemplating adding to it in the future. On the other hand I really like it just on it\'s own so maybe I will just start something new altogether...who knows!

*sigh* This is a lot how I imagined the conversation they had when Jim got home. Supportive, but scared and nervous and second-guessing. But in the end, they still have each others backs, and you did a great job of conveying that. Very cute!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!  I'm always happy to hear I come close to what other's may have imagined.  I'm so glad you liked it. 

This just makes me melt. If they're this sweet already, I can't wait to see what they're like when they actually have the baby. I'm betting it'll be adorable. I can't wait to see what's next!

I've tried to read this story like ten times, but I can never get past the first chapter. I've never cried at a story before (except for The Outsiders and every Harry Potter novel in which somebody died, but whatever) but I cried at this. Hard. Beautiful, amazing, job. I can't promise that I'll leave more reviews, but know that I'll be reading--even if it takes me years to be able to get through it.

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So so so so so so so freaking cute. I love the title, too, "The Olivia and Boomer Show." I really love Liv, she's so cute and Halpert-y and I love love this little family you're creating. Please do more--I mean, you have my suggestions already so I won't repeat them, but I will say:

GET TO IT. My email inbox is cold and lonely!!

Author's Response: I definitely want to do more with Olivia and Boomer, I think she is going to be a very interesting little girl :) I am so glad you like it, hopefully people are enjoying reading it as much as I like writing about them.\r\n\r\nI want to have the next one I told you about finished by maybe tomorrow, more likely Friday. And yes, I have your suggestions and love those ideas too, so don\'t worry, you may be bombarded with many chapters at once!

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Like I say every time, I love the family you've created for Jim and Pam. And I love that we get this sneak peek into the future, instead of having to go baby at a time, you know? Really great job, I'm looking forward to the next snapshot!

Author's Response: Thanks, doll! I think the next one I\'ll keep them older again, just to practice, even though I love writing about babies because who doesn\'t love babies?! I think I\'m channeling Kelly Kapoor, haha, oops.

=) I love all three, but as always, you knew that already! And I love the transition you wrote--you know the one--it fits so perfectly. And I agree with Hannah, who needs homework? Not me! (I'll regret that later, I think...)

Author's Response: I\'m glad it worked, thanks for all your help :) Don\'t keep putting these ideas about not doing homework in my head, you know I\'m easily distracted!...And who am I kidding, we both know I jumped on the no-homework wagon a long time ago.

Again, wonderful job. I'm going to stop telling you how great these are in our emails so that I can say them all in this little box, where they deserve to go. This chapter was so much fun and I loveeee the development of Liv and Jack as teenagers. I love this little family...can we meet the new baby next?

Author's Response: She or he will be making an appearance VERY soon, and expect Livy, Jack, Gavin and Maddie to have A LOT to say about it, haha. Thanks as always for the review, dear :)

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This showed up as a random story on the homepage, I saw the name, and had to come back and read it again! As good as I remember it being. If you’re still around, you should come join us again! I know I disappeared off the face of the earth way back when, but I promise to not do it again. :)

I'm glad you finished, because this is beautiful...just like everything else you write, haha. Wonderful job, though!

Author's Response: Well, I\'m glad you think so, but if we were to be compared you would own me. xD Thanks!