Penname: Moogie Man Real name:
Member Since: December 18, 2016

Bio:

 Retiring writing teacher. Looking forward to actually writing my own stuff.  Warning: I may be a bit edgy, but am impressed with what I've seen so far. Amazing that people still care bout Jam after all these years.

 

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Becoming Hitler by Alex Wert Rated: T [Reviews - 41] 12
Summary:

It's not so much that she hates the house - she does, but it's not so much that as it is that he purchased a house without without so much as mentioning it to her beforehand. But she'll never tell him that she hates it. And she hates why she'll never tell him why.

Pam/Alex! (not me, the one from the show)


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam, Other, Pam/Other
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12043 Read Count: 21704 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 08, 2009 Updated: February 10, 2009
Reviewer: Moogie Man Signed
Date: May 27, 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Withouy making this a porn, you need some more details of their encounter

Reviewer: Moogie Man Signed
Date: May 27, 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Ending leaves me flat. What did she do?

Reviewer: Moogie Man Signed
Date: January 02, 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Alex plus pam. Disgusting. aint gonna happen1

New York Pam by wendolf Rated: T [Reviews - 33] 14
Summary: Many months ago, while writing the controversial Philly Jim, I promised a companion piece from Pam's point of view. Well, here it is... or part one of it, anyway.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam, Pam/Other
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9806 Read Count: 13259 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: February 09, 2009 Updated: May 14, 2010
Reviewer: Moogie Man Signed
Date: December 21, 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

It's all about what Pam wants-just ask Pam! The hell with the rest.

Reviewer: Moogie Man Signed
Date: December 31, 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

As so many of you authors realize, Pam is a self-centered bitch! Someone write a story where Jim treats her like she treats him.

What She Knows by Freckleface Rated: K [Reviews - 15] 12
Summary: Pam's thoughts as she makes the drive from school in New York to Scranton that last time.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Inner Monologue, Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 697 Read Count: 1752 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: June 24, 2009 Updated: June 25, 2009
Reviewer: Moogie Man Signed
Date: December 31, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like it!

Lives, Love, Lived by morethanthat Rated: Private [Reviews - 16] 7
Summary: “Sometimes love affairs look different to the people inside them.” –Pam Beesly. A backwards look at the last eight years to come. Rated: M

Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Drama, Kids/Family, Married
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2185 Read Count: 2609 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: October 09, 2009 Updated: October 09, 2009
Reviewer: Moogie Man Signed
Date: December 31, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: This wasn’t how it was supposed to be.

Why is Pam always the strong one, albeit the one who wants to screw things up? I'd like to see Jim be more of a bad boy at times. Pam needs to feel pain like she causes/

The Leaving Story by mizjessica08 Rated: T [Reviews - 4] 1
Summary:

Jim Halpert told her once that he was not the leaving kind, and she believed him.

So I've re-named this after having written some more of the story. And changed it all a little. Instead of the temptations and fights I'd wanted to write, this all took a different spin.

Now we're starting with Jim's leaving and going back to examine how he got to that point.

Definitely a little heartbreaking, if I do say so myself. You've been warned.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim, Jim/Other, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Drama, Kids/Family, Married
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 729 Read Count: 4007 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 07, 2009 Updated: December 27, 2009
Reviewer: Moogie Man Signed
Date: January 04, 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Don't Bother Packing, Just Leave

I agree- too short. you set things up and just stopped. Shame!

Jim leaves by pajamaslove Rated: K [Reviews - 1]
Summary: A response to the 55 words to leave Scranton challenge.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim
Genres: Angst
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55 Read Count: 1146 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: March 25, 2010 Updated: March 25, 2010
Reviewer: Moogie Man Signed
Date: December 26, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: and then he was gone

That's all?!?

The Big New Yorker by Valexiamerna Rated: K [Reviews - 1]
Summary: In response to the 55 word challenge. Pam decides to walk a different path in Season 4.
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Challenges: 55
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103 Read Count: 1553 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: April 02, 2011 Updated: April 02, 2011
Reviewer: Moogie Man Signed
Date: December 27, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: The Big New Yorker

I feel left hanging. This needs much more text. Disturbing!

Choices by Deedldee Rated: K [Reviews - 6] 5
Summary: Set somewhere in the middle of "Business Trip." Pam in NYC before she comes home. A quick little drabbly one shot.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Drabble, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 769 Read Count: 1951 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 15, 2011 Updated: September 15, 2011
Reviewer: Moogie Man Signed
Date: December 31, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well written and (unlike so many stories aboutJim/Pam) BELIEVABLE!!!

Trust and Faith by OfficeLady Rated: T [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Jim doesn't tell the whole story -- and Pam finds out about it.



Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2577 Read Count: 2096 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 01, 2012 Updated: November 01, 2012
Reviewer: Moogie Man Signed
Date: December 27, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Pam should not accept this so easily. She should have an affair!(Just kidding!)

Either Way I Lose by bashert Rated: K+ [Reviews - 9] 8
Summary: One of them is going to have to make a huge sacrifice, and possibly resent the other. That’s the only scenario she can stomach, because the other scenario is that she stays in Scranton and Jim stays in Philadelphia, and even thinking of that makes her stomach lurch.

Spoilers for "Moving On."
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1019 Read Count: 2319 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: March 04, 2013 Updated: March 04, 2013
Reviewer: Moogie Man Signed
Date: January 03, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: So what difference does it make? Which one I choose?

Terrible place to stop. Most of these Jim/Pam stor[es are so bad I can' wait for them to end. Then you nail it-really get Jim and Pam down and quit!?!

One Week After by NobleLandMermaid Rated: M [Reviews - 50] 41
Summary:

Checking in on Jim's thoughts a week after certain events.
*double update: Chap 8 + 9 posted**
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Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Drabble, Drama, Fluff, Inner Monologue, Workdays
Warnings: Mild sexual content, Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3843 Read Count: 15937 ePub Downloads: 6
[Report This] Published: May 24, 2016 Updated: April 06, 2018
Reviewer: Moogie Man Signed
Date: February 27, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: In the beginning

II'm kind of in LaLa land on this piece. Will have to see more before I can give a comment.

Reviewer: Moogie Man Signed
Date: May 24, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: In the beginning

Are you a professional writer? If not, why not?

Author's Response: ha, not sure, guess I like writing fanfic too much ;-)

Welcome to Dunder-Mifflin by manidfk Rated: T [Reviews - 6] 2
Summary: After a few Stamford workers quit following the merger, the temp agency is forced to find a replacement. The new temp knows something he shouldn't.
Categories: Alternate Universe
Characters: Dwight, Jim, Michael, Other, Pam
Genres: Drabble, Inner Monologue
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3655 Read Count: 2786 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 28, 2016 Updated: April 12, 2017
Reviewer: Moogie Man Signed
Date: December 24, 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Weird in a Twilight Zone way! Nice change of pace. Opens up new ideas. Way to go!

Author's Response: Thank you, glad you like it!

Reviewer: Moogie Man Signed 9
Date: May 13, 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Well done! Please re view my tuff. I value your opinion.

Reviewer: Moogie Man Signed 10
Date: May 05, 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I think this is a piece you get or don't get. I get it! I hope you review more of my stuff. I like your quirkiness!

Author's Response:

Thanks Moogie Man! 

My thoughts were all over the place when writing this story and there hasn't been any coherent storyline, but I'm glad you like it!

Million Miles Away by Nicole Rated: T [Reviews - 1] 3
Summary:

It is Valentine's Day and Michael is throwing a party. Pam Goes to the party to blow off some steam and have fun. Pam gets a little drunk and gets the guts to do something she has been wanting to say for a long time.

Valentines Fanfic Contest Participant


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Michael, Pam, Pam/Roy, Phyllis, Roy
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim
Warnings: Other Adult Theme
Challenges: Valentine's Day Writing Contest 2017
Series: Valentine's Day 2017
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2768 Read Count: 1973 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: February 14, 2017 Updated: February 17, 2017
Reviewer: Moogie Man Signed
Date: February 27, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Million Miles Away

Very readable. You may not skim a cow, but you should read-a-bull! Seriously good job

Art Supplies and Paper by Pan_cake_Cats Rated: K [Reviews - 9] 2
Summary: Pam works at a chain art supply store, dreaming of her future.
Jim is a paper salesman at Dunder Mifflin.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Kelly, Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5633 Read Count: 9768 ePub Downloads: 8
[Report This] Published: February 15, 2017 Updated: July 02, 2018
Reviewer: Moogie Man Signed
Date: June 27, 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I liked this.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading <3 I am glad you liked it.

Out of the Fog by Kat11 Rated: MA [Reviews - 8] 26
Summary: Past Featured Story

 This story takes place right after the events of Valentine's Day, season 2. Pam has an epiphany and realizes that the life she wants isn't necessarily the life she has now. 

Valentines Day Contest Readers Choice

Disclaimer: I own nothing but my laptop and my imagination which is scary at times. Everything belongs to NBC who decided to cancel it.

 

This takes place during Valentine's Day and I've deiced to enter it into the 2017  Valentine's Day Writing Challenge. It's my first story here so I'm beyond excited. 

 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: None
Genres: Holiday
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Challenges: Valentine's Day Writing Contest 2017
Series: Valentine's Day 2017
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9659 Read Count: 5788 ePub Downloads: 10
[Report This] Published: February 15, 2017 Updated: February 16, 2017
Reviewer: Moogie Man Signed
Date: February 27, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was just flat well-written. damn!! How am I going to win the Valentine challenge? Don't even get me started about Msteapot. That chick, like you can WRITE!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and your kind words. I'm just doing my best here. And I totally ageee about msteapot, she has a way with words. Thanks again

The Impressionist by Keela Dee Rated: K [Reviews - 3] 4
Summary:

This is a “what if” situation that takes place during S3E16: Business School. It begins the day before this episode, on Valentine’s Day 2007, and ends at Pam’s art show the following night. What might have happened if Pam actually married Roy on the wedding date he set on the Booze Cruise (June 10, 2006)? This fanfic finds out.

Valentines Fanfic Contest Participant


Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Challenges: Valentine's Day Writing Contest 2017
Series: Valentine's Day 2017
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1576 Read Count: 1261 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: February 21, 2017 Updated: February 22, 2017
Reviewer: Moogie Man Signed
Date: February 27, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like it!

Everyday is April 5th by msteapot Rated: T [Reviews - 11] 22
Summary:

A drunken phone call between Pam and Jim, set in Season 3. 

Warning: References to alcohol

DISCLAIMER:  I don't own the Office.  If I did, there would be more drunk Pam. 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drunk Pam/Jim
Warnings: Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2874 Read Count: 3161 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2017 Updated: February 23, 2017
Reviewer: Moogie Man Signed
Date: February 24, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: put your memories beside mine

Well written. Jim still is gutless in the end and Pam, knows she can be slutty as hell, and still get him back. Oh well!

Author's Response:

Hi Moogie Man,

Although I appreciate your review, I would like to add that it is somewhat silly to insult a fictional character.  I know I speak for a community of writers when I say kindness and thoughtful critiques are appreciated!

Kind regards,

msteapot 

Reviewer: Moogie Man Signed
Date: February 25, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: put your memories beside mine

Part of the fun of these activities is to get into the characters and pretend they are real I have seen this done many times on MTT You are such a good writer, our story becomes real. I will continue to marvel at your skill but I will insult/praise/etc the characters as if they are real. If you don't like it, don't write so well!{Let me have my fanasty world!}

Author's Response:

Hi again Moogie Man!

I'm glad to hear back from you. In light of your comment, I think you are justified in your reasoning, but with respect to your opinions, my heart also goes out to the writers that may feel extremely discouraged by comments that seem insulting to their writing. I know how it feels to become so invested it a story, that your heart leaps and falls with the characters. I wanted to thank you for the compliment though, I am so glad to hear my writing makes you feel that way -- that is truly my motivation as a writer! Anyway, I hope you continue to read and review my other stories!

Kind regards,

msteapot  

Voicemails by msteapot Rated: M [Reviews - 28] 14
Summary:

 

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The voicemails Pam and Jim leave each other, after a 'hard day's work' at Dunder-Mifflin.  Will be covering every episode from Season 1 - Season 9.  

DISCLAIMER:  I don't own the Office or any of the characters affiliated with it.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: None
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9383 Read Count: 4068 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: February 23, 2017 Updated: November 16, 2017
Reviewer: Moogie Man Signed
Date: February 27, 2017 Title: Chapter 4: The Alliance

You obviously have watched the show more than once. You understand the characters and are faithful to who they are. (A big deal to me.) Keep on keeping on!

Author's Response:

Hahaha, busted! I have watched the show wayyyy more than once (an embarrassing amount of times, actually).  I'm glad you feel I am in tune with the characters! I really do try keeping the character voice's genuine.  Thanks for reviewing again, Moogie Man!

- msteapot