Penname: Alamos Real name:
Member Since: March 27, 2007

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Summary: The cast gets their epilogues in this piece that further proves that I have lost my mind.  Also, I am aware of the grammatical error in my title, however that was apparently the way that I wrote the name when I saved the file on Friday.  So I thought I'd leave it as is just to show that my brain has broken.
Categories: Other, Future
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Angst, Humor, Oneshot, Parody, Romance, Slash
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Challenges: Bad Fanfic
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 522 Read Count: 2774 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 31, 2007 Updated: July 31, 2007
Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: July 31, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: I Apologize Profusely

I always knew that Phyllis would be the happiest of them all.  I am not sure what the criteria of a Bad!Fic is... But this one is not "bad."

Author's Response: I think the definition of Bad!Fic is fic that is not right in the head.  Fics that, when you're reading them, make you say 'this is dumb'.  But so dumb, in fact, that you can't stop reading - just because you need to see what stupidity happens next.

Summary:

WYDM is Scranton's local radio station, with our favorite paper-pushers as DJs. Kelly gossips, Angela gives advice, Toby does traffic, and there's a new guy doing the morning show that's causing quite a stir...


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Humor
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11802 Read Count: 25227 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: August 06, 2007 Updated: September 14, 2007
Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: August 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: The Big Guns From Philly

Very Nice. You did a great job of keeping the characters truly "in character."  Off to chapter 2.

Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: August 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Concentration

Even in the AU world, Dwight and Angela are hiding their love -- Come out of the closet?  Will Oscar and Kevin be making appearances?



Author's Response: In due time :)  Thanks for reading!

Summary: Another death in the Office.
Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Suspense
Warnings: Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17485 Read Count: 8537 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: August 10, 2007 Updated: December 12, 2007
Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: August 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Some Killer Coffee!

I liked the other mystery story and I am digging this one. This is one is interesting because it got me to thinking... was Ryan the real intended victim?

Summary:

How the events of Casino Night effect Pam emotionally and how she digs herself up and out the hole of despair to be the Fancy and New Beesly of Season 3.

Completed 8/06/08


Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Angela, Dwight, Jim, Jim/Pam, Kevin, Michael, Other, Pam, Pam/Roy, Phyllis, Roy
Genres: Angst, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14482 Read Count: 29912 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: September 06, 2007 Updated: August 06, 2008
Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: July 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think the character descriptions are insightful and thoughtfully written. Also I like the dramatic mood you set around the desk and the kiss.

I love this line: She lost her breath, and was also losing her friend. I think that Pam knew right then and there that after Jim's confession that nothing would ever be the same.



Author's Response: Thanks Alamos! I was trying to draw the reader into Pam's emotions and feel them as she would have.

Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: July 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great job. Pam's anxiousness and nervousness is very apparent in this chapter.



Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you're reading this.

Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: July 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

The directness and abruptness of Jim was Pam seems like such a natural reaction ("No, not now." His voice showed his obvious exhaustion.) Another example of how these two lack in the communication area.

Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: July 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Pam's anger and frustration w/ Jim is a nice refreshing approach. I like how you haven't made her to be a "victim." The scream in the truck is such an honest raw reaction to her situation.

Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: July 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

The reaction from the people at DM was very amusing, especially that sneaky Phyllis.The relationship you created between Pam and her momo is one filled w/ kindness and understanding. You can see where Pam get her kindess.

Author's Response:

Your reviews are making me want to go back through this entire thing and re-read (and edit). :)

It's been almost a year since I started this fic, geesh I'm slacking.

Summary: Pushing paper isn't the only thing on the Dunder Mifflin crews minds' these days...their coworkers personal lives are.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3456 Read Count: 8134 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 09, 2007 Updated: December 04, 2007
Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: June 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: The Office Takes on Proust

A-W-E-S-O-M-E, These are so great. So witty and funny. I think you did a wonderful job of staying true to the character's voice. favorite line:  Kevin: “Journey. The band.”

Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: June 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Official Proust Answers

Again well done -- and Jim's answer to the Motto question -- “’It’s only eight hours a day, Jim. It’s only eight hours.’”  This is so something he would say.

Summary:

Ideas for Cold Openings (the pre-title gags) always pop into my head. So these will be just a bunch of teasers that, hopefully, you will find funny. I don't know how many I will post but I'll keep putting them up as they occur to me.

 


Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Humor
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 74 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 43087 Read Count: 274421 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: September 18, 2007 Updated: August 20, 2010
Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: October 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 12: Bag man

Just caught up on this story. Thank you for making me laught out loud at work. My cubby neighbors now know I am officially crazy.

I loved these stories, they were short, sweet and funny. I agree w/ Michael Target is better.

Best name ever: Sunflower Dawn Fergie Scarlett Johansson Aguilera Beesly Halpert



Author's Response: I'm hoping those crazy kids really name their child that...lol.. thanks!

Summary: Past Featured Story

With every choice we don't make, we create a universe...

WARNING: This is like, angst, to the tenth power, but I can promise a happy ending, if not exactly the one you might have in mind...

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9339 Read Count: 49887 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 17, 2007 Updated: June 30, 2008
Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: June 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Of all the streets, in all the cities...

This line caught my attention: a cruel interruption of lives in progress. A great way of defining the meeting of ex-loves.

Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: June 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: ...In all the world...

Of course Michael is Mr. Mom, I am glad that you have made him such a sweet dad. 

Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: June 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: ...of a Beautiful Friendship...

So I thought I would hate Molly... and maybe I will later. But I like that she is so straight forward w/ Jim, she seems strong and confident and ready to face the enemy.

Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: June 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: When the Wind Blows the Water White and Black...

Such a sweet chapter. It's nice to see how Doug fell in love with her and how he did not quit to get Pam.

Summary: Past Featured StoryPam and Jim reconnect after the events of Casino Night.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1517 Read Count: 6283 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: January 07, 2008 Updated: January 07, 2008
Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: June 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Three Rings and An Answering Machine

What a sweet story. The messages were so loving.

Summary: Jim must deal with a family crisis.  Pam helps him to get through it.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79354 Read Count: 184519 ePub Downloads: 47
[Report This] Published: January 21, 2008 Updated: February 05, 2011
Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: May 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Just finished reading this story. My favorite parts are when you are describing when Pam and Jim are physically close to each other.  Pam seems really organized and put together in the story.  Sometimes I get lost w/ all the medical stuff, but that just because me. Not you!

As Pam wrapped her arms around him, Jim reflexively encircled her in his own and rested his cheek on her head.  The warmth of her body, the gentleness of her touch, her soft hair under his skin all felt so reassuring, so consoling.  So right. 

 

Very nice.  



Author's Response: Thanks very much, Alamos!  I hope you continue to like the story as I post more chapters.  There will be more medical stuff but I'm going to try to keep it from getting overwhelming.

Summary: What if Pam had taken that Dunder Mifflin internship during Season 3? What would Jim think? An AU season 3 fic that deals with a side of Pam that we didn't get to see

"She's going to prove to everyone that she's not this fragile little flower that's waiting on Jim Halpert to ride up on his white horse and rescue her."
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Inner Monologue, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89299 Read Count: 116238 ePub Downloads: 42
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2008 Updated: July 10, 2008
Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: July 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

What a great narrative description of "The Merger." Also good job on describing Pam's sadness after Jim rejected her.  

 

Breakdown by time4moxie Rated: MA [Reviews - 131] 72
Summary: Past Featured StoryWhat if Pam confronted Jim a little sooner than on Beach Day? A S3 AU angst-fest, complete with uneaten pizza. Spoilers up to/around Business School....
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Humor, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37702 Read Count: 96866 ePub Downloads: 59
[Report This] Published: February 20, 2008 Updated: April 20, 2008
Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: March 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Fugue

Okay I finally got around to readin this story -- I love the "voice" that you gave Karen, I think you portrayed her as a strong yet vulnerable woman. Great job. The best part is the banter and conversations between Pam and Jim.

 

 

Summary: Hmmm. What if Pam had made a move on the Booze Cruise?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Katy, Pam, Pam/Roy, Roy
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10551 Read Count: 64184 ePub Downloads: 19
[Report This] Published: February 27, 2008 Updated: March 02, 2008
Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: October 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I finished reading this story today at work... and I am so lame but I don't how I did not read it before.  This story falls under the category "if only..." Those 27 seconds silence between Jim and Pam to me is in the top 5 Jam moments. The intensity between them and the lust/love in Jim's eyese for Pam. What I like about this story is that Pam was brave (and bold) w/ her feelings towards Jim. She knew exactly what she wanted and you wrote her strong and even a little sacred of the possibility of being w/o Roy. But the smut was amaaaaazing. Of course Jim looks good in jeans....

Summary: Past Featured StoryPam moved to New York instead of starting work at Dunder Mifflin. Years later she returns and she meets Jim, but they're at very different points in their lives.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Married, Romance
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 91635 Read Count: 137327 ePub Downloads: 35
[Report This] Published: March 13, 2008 Updated: July 22, 2008
Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: June 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: the Dundies ruined my life

(I am still reading and review as I go a few chapters at a time.) Such a sweet moment of Franny on Jim's chest. It was so perfect.  When Jim and Pam finally "hook-up" I thought it was cool how he could not keep his hands off of her. I am glad that you did not prolong their physical connection, I think it was invetiable that they were going to be together, and I am glad that you followed the natural progression of their "relationship" in the story.  It seems that our poor Jim is going to pull back from Pam in the next chapters.

Author's Response: Don\'t worry, Jim will come to his senses.

Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: June 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: she has your hair

Just catching up w/ this story. I think bringing Pam and Jim together when they are so sad and depressed is a great premise.  The tone of the story is spot on w/ the sadness they are going throught. Especially since I was pleasantly surprised that Pam is working at DM. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: I hope you enjoy the rest of it.

June 10th by wendolf Rated: M [Reviews - 235] 95
Summary: Past Featured StoryImagine Jim’s confession on Casino Night never happened and Pam actually made it down the aisle on June 10th . . . only to say “I don’t”.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33398 Read Count: 142911 ePub Downloads: 29
[Report This] Published: March 24, 2008 Updated: April 18, 2008
Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: April 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Here Comes the Bride

I read the entire at work, thank you for bringing joy to my dreary day. 

I love it. Love it!  Love the banter and dialogue between the two. And I love the touching and kissing. I am looking forward to the rest.



Author's Response: I’m prefacing all my review responses today with: sorry I’m so darn slow . . . I will be faster in the future, I promise. Now -- glad I could bring you joy, Alamos! Hope you liked the whole story. Thanks so much for reviewing!

10 years by malaz85 Rated: K [Reviews - 9] 8
Summary: Jim answers the question posed by David Wallace: "Where do you see yourself in 10 years?"
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Future, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 628 Read Count: 4852 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2008 Updated: April 08, 2008
Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: April 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am glad you were bored. Because I enjoyed reading it while I was bored. Great Story. Short, simply and sweet!

Author's Response: Thank you! Luckily I get bored a lot....