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Categories: Other, Future
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Angst, Humor, Oneshot, Parody, Romance, Slash
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Challenges: Bad Fanfic
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 522 Read Count: 2774 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: July 31, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: I Apologize Profusely
I always knew that Phyllis would be the happiest of them all. I am not sure what the criteria of a Bad!Fic is... But this one is not "bad."
Author's Response: I think the definition of Bad!Fic is fic that is not right in the head. Fics that, when you're reading them, make you say 'this is dumb'. But so dumb, in fact, that you can't stop reading - just because you need to see what stupidity happens next.
WYDM is Scranton's local radio station, with our favorite paper-pushers as DJs. Kelly gossips, Angela gives advice, Toby does traffic, and there's a new guy doing the morning show that's causing quite a stir...
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Humor
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11802 Read Count: 25227 ePub Downloads: 1
Date: August 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: The Big Guns From Philly
Very Nice. You did a great job of keeping the characters truly "in character." Off to chapter 2.
Date: August 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Concentration
Even in the AU world, Dwight and Angela are hiding their love -- Come out of the closet? Will Oscar and Kevin be making appearances?
Author's Response: In due time :) Thanks for reading!
Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Suspense
Warnings: Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17485 Read Count: 8537 ePub Downloads: 1
Date: August 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Some Killer Coffee!
I liked the other mystery story and I am digging this one. This is one is interesting because it got me to thinking... was Ryan the real intended victim?
How the events of Casino Night effect Pam emotionally and how she digs herself up and out the hole of despair to be the Fancy and New Beesly of Season 3.
Completed 8/06/08
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Angela, Dwight, Jim, Jim/Pam, Kevin, Michael, Other, Pam, Pam/Roy, Phyllis, Roy
Genres: Angst, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14482 Read Count: 29912 ePub Downloads: 4
Date: July 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I think the character descriptions are insightful and thoughtfully written. Also I like the dramatic mood you set around the desk and the kiss.
I love this line: She lost her breath, and was also losing her friend. I think that Pam knew right then and there that after Jim's confession that nothing would ever be the same.
Author's Response: Thanks Alamos! I was trying to draw the reader into Pam's emotions and feel them as she would have.
Date: July 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Great job. Pam's anxiousness and nervousness is very apparent in this chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you're reading this.
Date: July 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
The directness and abruptness of Jim was Pam seems like such a natural reaction ("No, not now." His voice showed his obvious exhaustion.) Another example of how these two lack in the communication area.
Date: July 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Pam's anger and frustration w/ Jim is a nice refreshing approach. I like how you haven't made her to be a "victim." The scream in the truck is such an honest raw reaction to her situation.
Date: July 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
The reaction from the people at DM was very amusing, especially that sneaky Phyllis.The relationship you created between Pam and her momo is one filled w/ kindness and understanding. You can see where Pam get her kindess.
Author's Response:
Your reviews are making me want to go back through this entire thing and re-read (and edit). :)
It's been almost a year since I started this fic, geesh I'm slacking.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3456 Read Count: 8134 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: June 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: The Office Takes on Proust
A-W-E-S-O-M-E, These are so great. So witty and funny. I think you did a wonderful job of staying true to the character's voice. favorite line: Kevin: “Journey. The band.”
Date: June 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Official Proust Answers
Again well done -- and Jim's answer to the Motto question -- “’It’s only eight hours a day, Jim. It’s only eight hours.’” This is so something he would say.
Ideas for Cold Openings (the pre-title gags) always pop into my head. So these will be just a bunch of teasers that, hopefully, you will find funny. I don't know how many I will post but I'll keep putting them up as they occur to me.
Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Humor
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 74 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 43087 Read Count: 274421 ePub Downloads: 5
Date: October 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 12: Bag man
Just caught up on this story. Thank you for making me laught out loud at work. My cubby neighbors now know I am officially crazy.
I loved these stories, they were short, sweet and funny. I agree w/ Michael Target is better.
Best name ever: Sunflower Dawn Fergie Scarlett Johansson Aguilera Beesly Halpert
Author's Response: I'm hoping those crazy kids really name their child that...lol.. thanks!
With every choice we don't make, we create a universe...
WARNING: This is like, angst, to the tenth power, but I can promise a happy ending, if not exactly the one you might have in mind...
Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9339 Read Count: 49887 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: June 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Of all the streets, in all the cities...
This line caught my attention: a cruel interruption of lives in progress. A great way of defining the meeting of ex-loves.
Date: June 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: ...In all the world...
Of course Michael is Mr. Mom, I am glad that you have made him such a sweet dad.
Date: June 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: ...of a Beautiful Friendship...
So I thought I would hate Molly... and maybe I will later. But I like that she is so straight forward w/ Jim, she seems strong and confident and ready to face the enemy.
Date: June 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: When the Wind Blows the Water White and Black...
Such a sweet chapter. It's nice to see how Doug fell in love with her and how he did not quit to get Pam.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1517 Read Count: 6283 ePub Downloads: 1
Date: June 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Three Rings and An Answering Machine
What a sweet story. The messages were so loving.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79354 Read Count: 184519 ePub Downloads: 47
Date: May 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
Just finished reading this story. My favorite parts are when you are describing when Pam and Jim are physically close to each other. Pam seems really organized and put together in the story. Sometimes I get lost w/ all the medical stuff, but that just because me. Not you!
As Pam wrapped her arms around him, Jim reflexively encircled her in his own and rested his cheek on her head. The warmth of her body, the gentleness of her touch, her soft hair under his skin all felt so reassuring, so consoling. So right.
Very nice.
Author's Response: Thanks very much, Alamos! I hope you continue to like the story as I post more chapters. There will be more medical stuff but I'm going to try to keep it from getting overwhelming.
"She's going to prove to everyone that she's not this fragile little flower that's waiting on Jim Halpert to ride up on his white horse and rescue her."
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Inner Monologue, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89299 Read Count: 116238 ePub Downloads: 42
Date: July 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
What a great narrative description of "The Merger." Also good job on describing Pam's sadness after Jim rejected her.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Humor, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37702 Read Count: 96866 ePub Downloads: 59
Date: March 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Fugue
Okay I finally got around to readin this story -- I love the "voice" that you gave Karen, I think you portrayed her as a strong yet vulnerable woman. Great job. The best part is the banter and conversations between Pam and Jim.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Katy, Pam, Pam/Roy, Roy
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10551 Read Count: 64184 ePub Downloads: 19
Date: October 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I finished reading this story today at work... and I am so lame but I don't how I did not read it before. This story falls under the category "if only..." Those 27 seconds silence between Jim and Pam to me is in the top 5 Jam moments. The intensity between them and the lust/love in Jim's eyese for Pam. What I like about this story is that Pam was brave (and bold) w/ her feelings towards Jim. She knew exactly what she wanted and you wrote her strong and even a little sacred of the possibility of being w/o Roy. But the smut was amaaaaazing. Of course Jim looks good in jeans....
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Married, Romance
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 91635 Read Count: 137327 ePub Downloads: 35
Date: June 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: the Dundies ruined my life
(I am still reading and review as I go a few chapters at a time.) Such a sweet moment of Franny on Jim's chest. It was so perfect. When Jim and Pam finally "hook-up" I thought it was cool how he could not keep his hands off of her. I am glad that you did not prolong their physical connection, I think it was invetiable that they were going to be together, and I am glad that you followed the natural progression of their "relationship" in the story. It seems that our poor Jim is going to pull back from Pam in the next chapters.
Author's Response: Don\'t worry, Jim will come to his senses.
Date: June 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: she has your hair
Just catching up w/ this story. I think bringing Pam and Jim together when they are so sad and depressed is a great premise. The tone of the story is spot on w/ the sadness they are going throught. Especially since I was pleasantly surprised that Pam is working at DM. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: I hope you enjoy the rest of it.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33398 Read Count: 142911 ePub Downloads: 29
Date: April 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Here Comes the Bride
I read the entire at work, thank you for bringing joy to my dreary day.
I love it. Love it! Love the banter and dialogue between the two. And I love the touching and kissing. I am looking forward to the rest.
Author's Response: I’m prefacing all my review responses today with: sorry I’m so darn slow . . . I will be faster in the future, I promise. Now -- glad I could bring you joy, Alamos! Hope you liked the whole story. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Future, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 628 Read Count: 4852 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: April 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I am glad you were bored. Because I enjoyed reading it while I was bored. Great Story. Short, simply and sweet!
Author's Response: Thank you! Luckily I get bored a lot....