Pam struggles with doubt and suspicion when Jim's behavior over the summer doesn't make sense.I have to admit about half way through this one I said what the heck is wrong with him. What a great job. I know we can never get something like this on the show so thanks for making it happen.
Author's Response: Yeah, Jim and Pam are so in sync with one another, that when one of them is deceiving the other, it distorts the relationship. Which makes the resolution that much sweeter, I hope. :) Thanks so much for reading.
That was really nice. You made me feel all happy inside with this one. The tender words that Pam had for Jim were beautiful.
Author's Response: Haha aww, well, I\'m happy that you felt happy =) Thanks!
I'm sorry I haven't reviewed this story yet. I really like it. I loved how you describe their taking it slow getting to know each other physcially. Looking forward to more.
WOW, I think that was one of the best chapters I have ever read in any story. Pam's realization and then her recall of everything. Incredible!
So good. I loved how you described Pam thinking about how her life became more about the wedding than the marriage. That is so true of alot of people. I really love this one.
Jim Halpert is a high school English teacher starting a new life at a new school in a new town.
That last chapter was the most creative thing I have seen. Your notes to your friends at the end brought a lump to my throat. Congratulations on a masterpiece!
This last chapter was a truly collaborative effort, kh. I'm so glad you enjoyed this and thank you so much for letting me know!
Great beginning. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: thank you so much!\r\nno worries - more is coming!
I love to read any quiet time these two have. I wish we could see some of them on the show. Thank you for making it possible.
I love this story. I find it very realistic that Jim would finally blow. He said things he didn't mean. Please keep going.
Yikes, this is a Pam weren't not used to. I hope she takes some time to really think about where Jim is coming from. They definitely need to sit down and talk.
Author's Response: They\'ll have their talk in the next, don\'t worry! :)
But baby I won't be there to catch you when you fall. 'Cause I'm always your last call...
I for one would welcome your stories here anytime. That was beautiful. Hope you have more.
I can't tell you how much this comment means to me! Watching the story's "views" go up and seeing no reviews was disheartening for a while, and I really appreciate you taking the time to comment. Thank you for your encouragement, you're too kind :)
I can't wait to read more. I feel so bad for the both of them. Please continue.
It was so much fun to read a happy morning between these two. Very nice.
That last quick phone call was perfect. I really loved your version of the crazy laundry guy. Great chapter.
It's always endearing to me to have Jim and his mom together.
I know that we’re solid and happy and it’s just the situation that makes things difficult once in a while. But sometimes you just need something tangible.
Pam takes a drive, set post-Baby Shower, so spoilers through that.
Wow, that was a perfect rendition of how they are feeling and need each other. I absolutely loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, kh!!
I was glad to see another update for this one. I think it is very cute.
Very nice, I look forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Well being the mother of three boys myself I have a soft place for this one. I really like your perspective on MOM!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, kh, and I\'m glad you liked it. I\'ve always wanted to \r\n\"meet\" Jim\'s mom, and I\'m hoping that hopefully, with maybe some wedding stuff going on on the real show, we might get to actually see her. I figure an awesome guy like Jim had to have a great mom and a good family life growing up. I\'m about to become a mom myself in a few months, so I guess I\'m practicing all this maternal love and whatnot, lol. I\'ve read so many different stories that featured Jim\'s mom, and some of them kind of painted her as a Pam-hater, but I don\'t think she would be that way. I think she would be the type that if her son were happy, then that would make her happy.
Spoilers for Crime Aid
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance, Travel, Workdays
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 491 Read Count: 3724 ePub Downloads: 0
That was perfect. Everybody needs reassurance in any relationship. I could feel the tone that you set when they said they loved each other. Really great!
Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate your review!!! I\'m glad you could feel the tone, that\'s what I was shooting for.
Really nice. I know we will never see anything close to this on tv. it's such a pleasure to have you all write stories that fill in the blanks. I loved the underlying tenderness they have with each other. Great job.
Author's Response: Thanks khand3stooges. That lunch scene just seemed to be leading up to explaining some of Jim\'s backstory so I had fun giving it a try. I appreciate your reading and reviewing.
Please forgive me for this title. I shouldn't be posting at 12:37 a.m....it makes me name things really stupidly. If you can come up with a better title PLEASE feel free to call it that in your mind.
My own little missing scene -- spoilers through Customer Survey
Don't own these characters, just admire them from afar. I mean no disrespect to NBC, the writers, actors, or any of those fine folks. This is just for fun. :-)
Perfection, if only we could see that on the show!
Author's Response: oh man what I would give to see it on the show! I can't wait to see what DOES happen though!
Fantastic! I loved that Pam came back to him. Thank you for wrapping up the scene we were left to worry about!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, Karen! I\'m glad you liked Pam coming back to Jim. I really wanted to do a scene where she\'s the one to take the initiative and say \'it\'s you and me, in this together.\'\r\n
Really great. That Jim always seems to think of Pam first and foremost. Please keep going!
Nice, I loved that Pam acknowledged she's alredy lived with regret. Thanks for a happy ending.
Author's Response: Yeah, I think Pam\'s had enough regret. And I am a sucker for the happy ending. :) Thanks for reviewing!
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