1 [Report This]Date: May 22, 2021 04:25 am Title: A Very Dwight Prologue
Sprinkles DOES know she’s Angela’s favourite haha - even more than Dwight is!
1 [Report This]Date: January 15, 2021 12:27 pm Title: A Very Dwight Prologue
Why did it take me so long to start on this story?
Full bookshelf. Spreading the reading. Overdosed on holiday fics. But I finally got to it and right from the start I am immersed and truly enjoying it.
Ok so Dwight saying “move cat” was purr-tect.
That Dwight can tell the height the bike accommodates.
Always tripping over a cat.
Childbearing hips.
Floppy haired idiot.
Love all these lines.
Love that we get mention of Danny (even if it felt so off canon even in the show).
And Sprinkles. Lots of great fun. Look forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I was nervous about writing Dwight but it turned out to be a lot of fun.
1 [Report This]Date: January 01, 2021 09:13 pm Title: A Very Dwight Prologue
Congrats on knocking out a WIP! I throughly enjoyed these last two chapters and laughed out loud at the Dwight and Angela bit. The pickle ornament was perfect. I actually have one, too, so I really got a kick out of that. Lovely little way to button the holiday season. Excellent job, friend!
1 [Report This]Date: December 31, 2020 08:36 pm Title: A Very Dwight Prologue
Honestly, I’m glad that Jim’s relationship with Karen ended a little more quickly than it did on the show. As much as I adore his and Pam’s relationship, I feel like it was unfair of him to use Karen as a shield from Pam, to use her as a weapon to fend off his emotions for her, and I think she had a right to be angry.
But, of course, I couldn’t care less what happened to Karen if it meant that he and Pam ended up together, and they did. I believe the ending was realistic and true to the show, as all good office fan fictions should be, and I wish you a happy new year.
BlindManCassidy
1 [Report This]Date: December 23, 2020 11:20 pm Title: A Very Dwight Prologue
For reasons passing understanding I failed to comment on this Dwangela scene when I first reviewed this. This is AWESOME Dwight dialogue. A mixture of pure oddness and some genuine unpleasantness and a fundamental charm.
"Dwight was proud of her for leaving the insubordinate warehouse worker and figured she would get into a new relationship quickly, she was a sufficiently attractive woman with good childbearing hips. Kelly's cartoonist neighbor seemed like a decent match on paper, and Danny Cordray was a catch, Dwight supposed, that is if things like facial symmetry were important to you." That's Dwight on Pam to a T.
1 [Report This]Date: April 18, 2020 09:50 am Title: A Very Dwight Prologue
Honestly I’d read an entire Dwangela fic if you wrote it, this was written so well. I liked how it was dialogue in the context of our favorite couple. It’s a new and interesting way to frame things! So not to put more on your plate but if you want to write an entire fic like this for us I’d be way happy. 😉
1 [Report This]Date: December 19, 2019 09:27 pm Title: A Very Dwight Prologue
This dialogue is great for these two, and the details are perfect.
Date: January 15, 2019 01:31 pm Title: A Very Dwight Prologue
Actually that was kind of fun. Dwight letting the air out of the bike tires was a nice touch. While the prank scoreboard is heavily in Jim's favor, Dwight's not off the board at all and it's something like that shows that fact.
The dialogue between Dwight and Angela seems very believable. His frustration at cats seems very appropriate. As does the fact that Angela will respond to kindness. Good chapter, onto the next one.
1 [Report This]Date: January 15, 2019 08:24 am Title: A Very Dwight Prologue
I wanted to add, on this prologue: very good Dwight...especially the bike and the opinion of Pam. Love it.
1 [Report This]Date: January 15, 2019 06:05 am Title: A Very Dwight Prologue
Spot on. Dwight and Angela very... Dwighty and Angely, I suppose :)