1 [Report This]Date: February 11, 2025 11:12 am Title: Chapter 2
Tons of fun JAM banter going back and forth everywhere here. Great job with that all. The party seemed like lot of fun too. It was really good to see them acting like this with each other. The fact that they're mistaken for a couple is fairly telling. As is the fact that Pam just says, "I'm engaged to someone else," and leaves it at that. She finally has a date for the wedding and is probably getting into hardcore planning by now. Yet when given the opportunity to gush about her upcoming wedding she doesn't. Clearly while her head might still be in that relationship, her heart isn't. Granted Roy not taking her out for Valentine's Day and also ditching her for this weekend isn't doing him any favors, but still.
Then after a scene that feels like it came right out of "Lady and The Tramp," Jim gets the courage to be totally honest. Kind of evil to leave it there, but as a fellow writer I get it. Tons of fun. Really looking forward to seeing where this goes. Jim's confession much earlier and when Pam's feeling good about being with him and is on the rocks with Roy. Should be fun to see.
