6 [Report This]Date: April 30, 2009 06:43 pm Title: Bring Your Child to Work Day
Congrats on your first story here! I really enjoyed it - your Michael was spot-on, the cat references for Angela were perfect and who wouldn't love Sydney. Hope we see more from you!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Writing Michael was challenging but fun, I'm glad you think I did well with it. I hope to do more soon, I'm glad you liked it!
8 [Report This]Date: April 26, 2009 02:21 pm Title: Bring Your Child to Work Day
Great first fic. My only suggestion would be sending your work to a beta for grammar/spelling mistakes, but the story itself was very cute
Author's Response: Thanks! I was a little confused on how the beta thing worked since it's my first time, but now I understand how and I'll ask someone to beta my next story.
Date: April 26, 2009 10:26 am Title: Bring Your Child to Work Day
Aww, how adorable! This was an awesome story, especially for your first fanfic! I can totally see a day like this happening in the Office Universe if/when Jim and Pam have a child. I love how you made little Sydney a perfect mix between her mother and father. I really hope you do continue this!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I think I am going to continue :)