10 [Report This]Date: August 09, 2010 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
I've just read this for the first time. I don't know if you're still receiving updates showing reviews, but I want to let you know how beautiful I find this. You can feel the hurt in his heart, chest, head. Wonderful.
Date: April 29, 2007 03:48 am Title: Chapter 1
Poor, poor Jim. This is a great piece, though. I think it's a true reflection of what he was feeling in that moment.
10 [Report This]Date: August 25, 2006 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh so sad.
Date: August 14, 2006 07:47 am Title: Chapter 1
Not quite sure how I missed this earlier, but I just read it and now my heart is breaking for a fictional character. You always do such a great job of capturing Jim's quiet desperation.
10 [Report This]Date: July 17, 2006 04:18 am Title: Chapter 1
shannon you always amaze me!
8 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2006 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, Jim. Booze Cruise is definitely *the* best episode for post-ep Jim angst. I used that one myself!
10 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2006 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was so awesome - you just know that this is exactly what Jim was thinking. My favorite line: "You’re just so fucking tired of going around and around and always ending up back in the same place" So very well done. You are so good at this. I just love your stories.
9 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2006 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, Jim. You capture the side of him he tries not to show us.
Date: July 16, 2006 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great Jim POV - very strong and believable.
9 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2006 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
"Sometimes you love her so much that you’re afraid you might start to hate her for all that." This is a great Jim POV. The section about hurting Katy so she can share the pain - terrific.