1 [Report This]Date: February 08, 2019 08:38 am Title: Chapter 1
Really great. Honest and raw without making her look like a crazy person. But I am glad things ended the way they did. 🙂
Date: March 01, 2007 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'll throw garbage on you, but only because it's fun to throw garbage at people. I like Karen (actually, if I were Jim I'd be like "Pam who?") and this was a very honest interpretation of what she's going through that I think is sorely lacking in fandom, so thanks.
Date: February 05, 2007 10:10 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm so glad you wrote this - I was trying to come up with something too. I really see them right here - you captured it so well!!!
Date: February 03, 2007 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
I liked this a lot... I think it's very realistic. And by Day 3, I couldn't help but laugh, because you really captured the sense of how women overthink things so much and tend to continue conversations hours, days later.
10 [Report This]Date: February 03, 2007 11:12 am Title: Chapter 1
I love that this doesn't paint Karen to be a freakin' crazy woman, because nothing in her character so far would ever lead me to believe that she'd dedicate so much to something she didn't think was worth it, and in this story, Jim is totally making her believe that it is.
I love this. Amazing job! (And, if you couldn't tell, I love Karen, too, I'll help you clean the garbage off)
Date: February 03, 2007 11:01 am Title: Chapter 1
“I need to move on with my life. And, if it’s okay with you, this is where I’d like to start.”
Aw. And that, I believe, is the perfect way of summing up why he's going through all this for her.
This was wonderful!
9 [Report This]Date: February 03, 2007 09:59 am Title: Chapter 1
POOR JIM. Oh goodness. This is so good, and so in character, and it just fills in so many gaps as to why Jim is so physically and emotionally exhausted, and as to why Karen is so confused and frustrated. I really, really liked this.
Date: February 03, 2007 09:31 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm so glad someone wrote about this! I think this is very possibly where they are right now-Jim told Karen everything but also that he needs to move on because Pam doesn't want him.
Loved Karen saying that she couldn't get any work done because she kept focusing on Pam--seems so real, and very Karen.