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Reviewer: grapejelly Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2008 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

Assuming Pam is marrying Jim, I really like this story! Otherwise...so sad.

Reviewer: grapejelly Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2008 08:48 am Title: Chapter 1

Assuming Pam is marrying Jim, I really like this story! Otherwise...so sad.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 16, 2006 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

Sweet

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: lano Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2006 06:51 am Title: Chapter 1

This was very sweet, oh how I love a happy ending :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 17, 2006 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was so good! I'm not sure how much she lets herself know, yet, but it's all in her heart somewhere. And "yay!" for a happy Jammy ending!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 17, 2006 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

I liked it. I've always thought that Pam knew exactly what she was doing when she took her hair down for Kelly. I can see Pam thinking all of these thoughts, even if another inner voice then told her she was being a little cruel. I was relieved that Jim was the groom at the end - if he'd been a guest, the thoughts would definitely have been cruel. Good Pam POV!

Author's Response: I would never do that to you! Well, actually I considered it, but I thought it would be too mean. :)

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed [Report This]
Date: July 17, 2006 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is a part of their relationship I'm really interested in: how much is Pam aware of the effect she has on Jim? Engaging and sweet.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm not sure how much I think she knows, but she has to know something. I mean, no one is that oblivious.

Reviewer: ella eternity Signed [Report This]
Date: July 17, 2006 10:12 am Title: Chapter 1

"He calls her a dork and she thinks she's never heard anything sound so much like love."-i loved that. this was a great story.


Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I really liked that line, too. Can I say that if I wrote it? :)

Reviewer: princesslisa Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 17, 2006 10:00 am Title: Chapter 1

I'm a sucker for a happy ending. Now we just need the bits in between the flashbacks and the wedding.

Author's Response: I know, I wish I could have put something about the in-between parts in there, but they just didn't come to me. Everything I had for that felt too forced, so I just left them out. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 17, 2006 09:34 am Title: Chapter 1

I loved this story. So romantic and sweet. My favorite line: "It's because she knows that he's going to be seeing her in the dress today, knows his breath will be taken away when he sees her , walking towards him, towards forever"

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 17, 2006 07:18 am Title: Chapter 1

I was just thinking of the fact that Pam probably knew the effect she had on Jim. This fic fit right into my thoughts.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I'm not sure I think she knows the extent of her effect, but she has to know something. It was fun to write, though.

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