9 [Report This]Date: March 02, 2007 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Good job. I know so many writers who can't fathom portraying Karen in a sympathetic light and I'm glad that you've written a first of those five nights of talks story with her as the innocent victim that she is (rather than the krazy bitch of so many other fics).
Author's Response: I must confess that I really really really like Karen and totally sympathize with her situation. It's not her fault that she walked into the epic love story of the century. Poor girl.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
cheers.
--Lex
Date: February 09, 2007 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Congrats on your first Office fic! I thought it was very well written, you really got their voices and their characters down. And I really loved this line - “But right now, I’m not ready to decide whether or not I want to (be) the girl that you’re with because the girl that you’re in love with won’t love you back.” Such a perfect line (although I think you meant to put a "be" where I indicated above.)
Author's Response:
Ah. Thanks. I tend to just type these things up while staring intently at the keyboard. Otherwise I stare and stare at it and I learn to hate it. *laughs*
I kinda like to side with Karen, since she's a very sympathetic character. It's not her fault that she showed up too late.
Anyway, thanks for the review!
cheers.
--Lex
Date: February 09, 2007 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Really well done. Looking forward to another chapter.
Author's Response:
Well, actually, there won't be more of this. I really only considered it to be a one-shot. Thanks so much for the review!
cheers.
--Lex