Date: December 30, 2007 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Stumbled into this and, wow, loved it! There's just something so right about Toby having fantasies about Angela (and sometimes Dwight).
'The day Michael and Dwight headed off to the convention, she wore a new black skirt that made him realize Michael was actually right, for once, when he tried to give her the “tight ass” Dundie the year before.'
Totally made my day.
Author's Response:
Heh, my calm, sweet-tempered husband is mad for bossy Angela, so it seemed right that Toby would be so, too.
Thanks for reading! Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: March 02, 2007 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh God no. Any thoughts of Toby/Dwight are strictly verboten.
Author's Response:
Heh. Sorry about that.
Thanks for reading!
9 [Report This]Date: February 14, 2007 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Eeee! Five perfectly crafted vignettes - very Toby and very Angela! Love that her forehead smoothes when she works - so in her element - hee. The changes in intonation in #2 + #3? Awesome.
And... um... white stockings in the back seat? Oh, man... I think I just had a little fantasy.
"Question!"
Heh! I'm so gonna be looking for Toby the next time Dwight says that :)
Author's Response:
Maybe now that Toby has Hot Gym Girl, he can ask her to recreate some of these!!
Glad you liked them, and thanks for the title!
Date: February 13, 2007 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
"Question!" AHAHAHAHA! This whole thing is great, so well crafted. And of course Toby would think of Angela that way. Awesome.
Author's Response: Thanks! Swear to God, the day before I posted it I still hated it and felt it didn't work. I changed about two dozen words and all of a sudden it was okay. Go figure.
Date: February 12, 2007 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, Toby. That was very interesting! Especially how Angela's real actions motivate him even more. He's a glutton for pain, that Toby.
Author's Response:
The last episode (with the pretty gym girl) kinda pushed this out of the realm of could-be-canon, but I couldn't get the idea out of my head about what Toby would have thought of that slap.
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: February 12, 2007 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love the fact that you can take these supporting characters and make these great little backstories for them. I especially enjoyed the little bit at the end about Dwight and his "Question." Hee.
Author's Response: Thanks, GreenFish! I feel like the supporting characters give me more freedom.
Date: February 12, 2007 06:27 am Title: Chapter 1
hahahahahahahaha! Oh lordy lordy lord. I love it! GREAT job LL! :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I don't think of myself as having a lot of humor skillz as a writer, so I'm thrilled when I manage to make someone laugh.
10 [Report This]Date: February 11, 2007 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
I will never again be able to hear Dwight say "Question!" without thinking of this story!! So well done, and so hot in a Toby kind of way.
PS Thanks so much for the Valentine and bookmark! What a sweet thing to find in the mailbox the day after my heart went "thunk" watching P.W.
Author's Response:
I am tickled that a legion of fanfic fans will now think dirty, dirty thoughts about Toby whenever they hear "Question!"
Re: the Valentine and the bookmark -- you're welcome! I'm glad it cheered you up!
10 [Report This]Date: February 11, 2007 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is too, too good. Even though Angela isn't actually part of the action in this, the way you've characterized her is perfect, and I love the line about Toby picturing her wearing something snug, dark, and severe. You've done fabulously with Toby as well. I think it's great the way you talked about how he's not into internet porn or dirty magazines -- he does seem much more the type to take something from his everyday life and use that instead, and the fact that it's Angela just... oh. Perfect. She is the sharp, strong contrast to his mopey, sad self. I love it. This is completely wonderful.
And the ending! With Dwight! Just too funny and fabulous. Thanks for this!
Author's Response:
This is very much inspired by my husband's swoony love of sexy/severe Angela -- I have seen the scene of Angela in her tight black skirt from The Convention many, many times. ;)
I'm glad you liked it! Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: February 11, 2007 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Okay, at first your thank you confused me - I thought maybe you had gotten me mixed up with someone else who'd helped you with this, then I saw the "stroke mag" and it all came back to me. (No pun intended, of course.)
That said, this is an absolutely fascinating pairing, first of all; you really make his attraction to her (and the catalysts for it) so real here. The end with Dwight made me laugh right out loud.
Great work here! (I'm guessing the Liberry Lord loved it, no?)
Author's Response:
I'm sad that whoooole funny/weird convo got lost in the server crash.
And yes, the LiberryLord was happy!
Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: February 11, 2007 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ohmygod. You are amazing. This is amazing. The bonus Dwight made my head explode and now I'll be looking for Toby anytime Dwight says "Question."
So innventive and weird and hot...I think the combination just makes this perfect.
Author's Response:
I hadn't thought about how I'll be responding to Dwight's "Question"... but now I'll be looking for Toby, too!
Glad you liked it!
Date: February 11, 2007 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG, the bonus Dwight almost made me pop a stitch. That is just so wrong. But in a good (naughty) way!
Author's Response:
Hee! I love that scene where Dwight questions Toby about "the female vagina," and so had to work it in somehow.
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: February 11, 2007 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. Didn't expect that. Yet, I could totally see it. ...her Sunday school teacher shoes...that just sums up so much about Angela. This was so funny, and oddly hot. I like that. (Btw, should this be rated 'M'? I'm never sure where those lines are drawn.)
Author's Response:
I wasn't sure what to rate it, because it isn't explicit. I feel like I don't want to rate something an M if it doesn't deliver!
"Oddly hot." I like that. Thanks!
Date: February 11, 2007 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
OK. STOP IT. I remember this mentioned on TWoP a while back and I love what you made of it.
TOBY. ANGELA.
AWESOME.
Author's Response:
Hee! You know Toby would enjoy a bossy woman.
Thanks for reviewing!