Date: March 04, 2007 07:18 pm Title: Reservations
This was great. It's really too bad they'll both be murdered tomorrow by Jan.
Author's Response: LOL! On the other hand, she may just assume that this is all part of Michael's usual ineptness. Thanks for reading!
Date: February 14, 2007 07:50 pm Title: Reservations
Ok, first of all, poor Jan. Dating Michael should be punishment enough without adding embarassement and ruined plans... But she knew what she was getting into by being with him, so it's on her.
The undercurrents of tension between Jim and Pam were totally there, and I particularly loved Pam's "Well, they'd had a moment. There will be more." Because indeed there will be.
Author's Response: Thanks! I didn't want to make this ALL about Jim and Pam, because the comedic potential of Michael and Jan is just so awesome, even though they don't actually appear in the story. Glad you enjoyed this!
Date: February 14, 2007 06:25 pm Title: Reservations
Haha, they are too evil. That was really funny. And sweet. Good job!
Author's Response: Thanks! A Valentine's Day they'll never forget...
Date: February 14, 2007 05:40 pm Title: Reservations
Might be a bit mean, in that I could never see them doing all of this stuff, especially to Michael. But the banter is dead on, and of course bonus points for Army of Darkness.
Author's Response: I thought about whether Jim and Pam would prank Michael like this, and then remembered Jim not inviting Michael to his party, and tweaking him on the "TWSS" in "Sexual Harrassment", so I figured, yeah, they might step over the line and prank him. That's why I like fanfic--we can try out stuff we might never see on the show. Thanks very much for reading!
Date: February 14, 2007 05:22 pm Title: Reservations
OMG - you did NOT just write a fan fic that has Pam and Jim bonding over her renting "army of darkness"???? that is frickin awesome. i LOVe thatmovie. "gimme some sugar baby." nice one NEJ!
Author's Response: Of course Pam would love "Army of Darkness". She rented "28 Days" and "28 Days Later", didn't she? :) I love that movie, too; in fact, I gave it to my husband for Valentines!
Date: February 14, 2007 05:00 pm Title: Reservations
I love this! The verbal/non verbal exchange they have over the DVD is so them. Are we going to see a chapter 2?
Author's Response: No, sorry. When I mark a story "Complete" I usually mean it; only once have I broken that rule. But I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: February 14, 2007 04:58 pm Title: Reservations
I love their banter and their pranking of Michael.
Author's Response: Thanks. The banter is the hardest part to get right.