10 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2006 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really love the stillness of this piece, because it captures the mood of the show perfectly.
Well done!
6 [Report This]Date: August 13, 2006 09:52 am Title: Chapter 1
"And he can tell exactly how angry she is by the set of her shoulders" I love this line. You do a wonderful job of describing Jim and what he's feeling. I can totally see this as an added scene at the end of the episode.
Date: August 02, 2006 04:04 am Title: Chapter 1
you captured jim so well, as usual. makes you really understand why jim would complain to toby.
8 [Report This]Date: July 19, 2006 01:17 am Title: Chapter 1
Great Jim POV. You can feel his weariness.
6 [Report This]Date: July 18, 2006 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Poor Jim having to hear about the honeymoon, too. I enjoyed this a lot, it helps explain the desperation that drove Jim to complain to Toby.
9 [Report This]Date: July 18, 2006 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Poor, tired, bleak Jim. You've captured him brilliantly.
10 [Report This]Date: July 18, 2006 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great post-ep for Conflict Resolution. Dwight doing something wretched with the Post-its? Funny! The rest, however, was quite sad for poor, poor Jim.