Date: April 27, 2007 05:49 am Title: Memorable
Hooray for Michael's awkward questions! (7? Wow)
Hooray for JAM babies, and hooray for Angela!
Date: April 27, 2007 04:42 am Title: Memorable
Oh, Michael is the king of creating awkward situations! And that last scene was lovely. So sweet!
Date: April 26, 2007 10:11 pm Title: Memorable
Wow. I just found this and read it all in one sitting. I love the two out of three tests (thought I was the only one who did that!), and the prospect of a little JAM baby is so sweet. I look forward to more!
Date: April 10, 2007 11:52 am Title: Communication
Hurray for this kind of communication!
Date: April 08, 2007 09:02 am Title: Communication
Blah! As I hit submit, i also wanted to say how much I loved Jim for forcing her to talk. I know I always treasure those people, those who don't accept leave me alone/i'm fine as answers, those who are like, no, you aren't, and i am not going to leave you until you tell me whats wrong, and even then i won't leave you cause i care about you.
so, i loved that aspect of jim.
Date: April 08, 2007 09:01 am Title: Communication
Poor Pam. It really is rough losing a baby (well, thankfully not that I have experience, but I can imagine). :( Poor Pam!
Date: April 04, 2007 10:59 pm Title: Emptiness
Ugh...how horrible that they had to lose the baby---but Im a big fan of Pam's plan to practice for making a new one
Can't wait for more!
Date: April 04, 2007 03:49 pm Title: Emptiness
Oh, this was sad because of their loss but still quite a relief that things aren't as bad as they could have been. At least Pam's going to be okay. Sweet baby talk at the end...
Date: April 04, 2007 10:53 am Title: Emptiness
Good chapter!
Date: April 04, 2007 05:34 am Title: Emptiness
Aww, Pam was pregnant! And she had a miscarriage :'(. Although I gotta say, I laughed when i read this - "Jim, you knocked me up. I think my mother figured out the fact we're sleeping together."
I am really really loving this story
Date: April 04, 2007 01:15 am Title: Emptiness
How bittersweet!
Date: April 02, 2007 10:37 pm Title: Frightening
OH NO! Update soon!!
10 [Report This]Date: April 02, 2007 09:32 am Title: Frightening
AH! So NOT where I was expecting this chapter to end up!
Date: April 02, 2007 06:10 am Title: Frightening
This is one of my favorite stories going right now...I always get excited for an update, whether I find it on ff.net or here at MTT.
Oh man...Pam not wanting Jim (either of them really) to go to New York. Eek. You can't just shoot one person's life-changing proposition down like that. Compromise is better than an outright "no."
Then, she's in a car accident? OMG! Can't wait for the next chapter, seriously.
Date: April 02, 2007 05:49 am Title: Frightening
Ok, I you are just mean! I was hoping we'd find out why Pam didn't want to move and what she had to talk to her mom about! I like that you are exploring how Pam & Jim navigate some trouble in their lives & their relationship -- this is a good read!
Author's Response: Don't worry...you'll find out what all that was about right away in the next chapter...which I hope to finish tonight if I get the chance. Besides, why would I be nice and give the people what they want?
Date: April 02, 2007 05:46 am Title: Frightening
Jan is awesome. Aww, I can understand Jim wanting and Pam not wanting to move! But its hard! wow that was kinda TWSS.
WTF!!!! YOU MADE PAM GET IN A CAR ACCIDENT!!!! WHAT!!!! NOT COOL!
Date: April 02, 2007 03:58 am Title: Frightening
WHAT? Mean. And I was so curious about the important thing Pam had to talk to her mom about and now I won't know until Pam recovers! Is it weird that I'm more worried about finding that out than Pam being hurt? I might be a little evil. Much like you, apparently!
I loved Jan in this - so insightful and understanding :)
Date: April 01, 2007 09:13 pm Title: Fascinating
Love the line about the condoms and how Jim calls Pam a "sex fiend" (although in that sentence, you need "too" instead of "to"). I think Pam would have taken her own car to lunch - always have your own ride when you see an ex or a guy you're not that interested in (free advice, BTW, I'm full of that!).
I love that Roy thinks who Pam's with is his business! Not anymore, buddy.
I'm one who thinks that when Jim and Pam would get together, the sex would be awesome, because of the depth of feelings they have and all, but I know there are people who disagree (about these totally fictional characters)! Anyway, glad you've gotten them to the awesome point!
If there's more, I'll be glad to see it.
Date: March 31, 2007 01:13 pm Title: Fascinating
Glad to hear (read) that our couple was willing to put in the time & effort to get it right. Ahem.
And Roy sounded very 'Roy'. Still hanging on. Pam & Jim 'outing' their relationship could make for a very interesting 'story hour', too.
Date: March 31, 2007 06:18 am Title: Distraction
There are so many little moments I love in this - it'd take me forever to cite them all. I really like that you've made it so realistic, a little bit awkward - but perfectly them.
Can't wait to read what's next!
Date: March 31, 2007 06:12 am Title: Fascinating
wow, good thing they both finally got their act together for great sex.
and okay, this was totally odd, but i will admit, that if the roles were reversed, the first thing i thought of when roy showed up was 'wow, roy is going to say he is pregnant' haha, no idea where that came from but that was the first thought.
Date: March 28, 2007 12:53 pm Title: Horrifying
I love how it was so awkward for them. normally you read about these incredible romance scenes, but this was so much more real, and alot funnier. :)
Date: March 28, 2007 11:51 am Title: Horrifying
ahahahahahaaaa!!!
Oh goodness. The comment about it being like virgins is great because first times are usually completely horrifying experiences. And the fact that Jim and Pam didn't have an earth-shattering "you complete me" experience the first time is refreshing and just so hilarious.
Thanks so much.
cheers.
--Lex
Author's Response: Well, I had "Like a Virgin" by Madonna stuck in my head for the better part of this chapter so, I just had to throw a virgin reference in there...plus there was this horrifying image of Steve Carrell shirtless going on...I can't tell you how, but it was there. And it scared me a little. Oh, and you're welcome so much!
Date: March 28, 2007 07:57 am Title: Horrifying
haha, wow, i loved teh fact that they had bad sex! that was so hilarious! i loved it
Date: March 28, 2007 02:55 am Title: Horrifying
I'm really addicted to this story. I think you have their voices down! I can see and hear them say everything you write! Bravo for letting them have to go through some bad sex before the earth-shattering sex, haha! That's very true to life. Please keep doing what your doing!