Date: March 27, 2007 11:16 pm Title: Horrifying
Now that's not something you read every day....but I liked it that they were both soooooo nervous and awkward....now they just have even more reason to practice till its perfect
I'm really enjoying this story and now that I know its here I'll try to reply more (I was following this at FF.net, which I tend to not reply as much on...anyway I thought it was important to share that...I'll stop now :o) )
Date: March 27, 2007 09:32 pm Title: Horrifying
I would like to say that I like this series, but that's an understatement given the fact that I just read all ten chapters in one sitting. The prank on Dwight was great, and Jim's desire to return to the dishes after the debacle was a nice touch. Please update soon!
Date: March 27, 2007 08:24 pm Title: Horrifying
Thank you for writing a "first time Jim and Pam have sex it's bad" fic...I have to say that's how it's gonna be :) How nervous will they fricking be!? For serious.
Date: March 27, 2007 07:14 pm Title: Horrifying
Awesome. I love it that they sucked the first time - brilliant!
Date: March 27, 2007 07:06 pm Title: Horrifying
Hee!! I think the awkwardness is kind of cute! (But really now, how bad could sex with Jim be???)
Date: March 26, 2007 03:52 pm Title: Overreaction
oh my gosh, I had so many chapters to catch up on!
This is just such a cute story. I can just see Pam throwing something at Jim's head. Brilliant.
Thanks so much!
cheers.
--Lex
Date: March 26, 2007 07:46 am Title: Overreaction
ah, not breaking up, just can't sleep together without sleeping together. hehe. :)
Date: March 26, 2007 06:26 am Title: Overreaction
I love their pranks on Dwight, and could totally see them doing this. And "I want to marry you someday"? *fangirly sigh*
More, please!
Date: March 25, 2007 08:33 pm Title: Overreaction
So cute! I'm totally loving this fic! I get so excited when I see you've updated it! Please continue!
Date: March 25, 2007 03:31 pm Title: Overreaction
This was really nice. The three things you mention in the definition are my three favorites.
Kelly hearing about the date reminds me of the time Pam called Kelly to say her new clothes had arrived and Pam had to pull the phone away from her ear. Was that your inspiration for the squealing and the hand to the ear?
I also love that Kelly was yakking about the date all weekend to Ryan, with no detail to go on!! Poor Ryan. I'm not sure Ryan actually would wink at Pam though, do you? I know it was a "go talk to Kelly" thing, but I'm not sure it's his style.
It's so sweet how happy Jim is when Pam refers to herself as his girlfriend, and how happy Pam is when she realizes they're still together. Sweet, sweet.
Author's Response: The whole phone thing has actually happened to me. A friend of mine called about a guy once and she squealed so much I had to hold the phone away from my head.
My idea behind Ryan being that way will come into play later. I was just thinking that Ryan knows about another secret office romance and that one creeps him out. I just feel that Ryan would be excited for Jim and Pam since he seems to be "friends" with both of them. The wink is a little OOC, but at the same time, I think that it kinda works...at least for now.
Thanks for reading and letting me know what you think works and what you don't. It's so nice when people give their honest feedback.
Date: March 25, 2007 03:27 pm Title: Overreaction
I can almost hear Kelly squealing!! And the Pam/Jim miscommunication just keeps going & going... so like them!
Author's Response: Miscommunications seem to be the basis of their relationship and it's kinda fun to play around with that.
Date: March 22, 2007 07:14 am Title: Adorable
awww, that is adorable. thats all i gotta say. and kelly's reaction - very true to life (and my life i mean fictional life where kelly exists)
Date: March 19, 2007 03:00 pm Title: Adorable
Aww, that truly, truly was adorable :)
7 [Report This]Date: March 18, 2007 05:47 pm Title: Adorable
I like this story and its pace. It is moving slowly for them, but I think that's how it should be. I really like the definition bookends - very creative and cute.
Date: March 18, 2007 04:47 pm Title: Adorable
ADORABLE!!! ARE you kidding me?!? I can totally picture Jim doing this. *melts*
Date: March 18, 2007 03:10 pm Title: Adorable
That IS adorable. So sweet. I'm enjoying your definitions.
Date: March 18, 2007 02:58 pm Title: Adorable
okay yeah that really was adorable. I like how they kept "accidentally" running into each other throughout the week. It's good fluff--leaves me smiling when I'm done :)
Date: March 15, 2007 07:11 am Title: Comical
Hmm... I think they would have spent Sunday together, at a minimum just hanging out and enjoying the fact that they COULD be together. (Hey, that's not angry typing; I just don't know how to do italics here.)
I'm not sure why Jim comes in to the office looking somewhat angry and sad...? Is it just because he realized he could have been w/Pam Sunday and wasn't?
This line is so sweet: "I may have to break up with that boyfriend of mine so we could go out...I mean, if you love me now and everything."
Let's see... what to write... Happy Pam! Happy Jim! (This is a happy place... happy thoughts.)
Thanks for this. Can we get some of this on the real show? Just a little break-up of Jim and Karen and some happy Jim and Pam? Is that too much to ask? (I might have to start angry typing soon.) Thank goodness for fanfic.
Date: March 15, 2007 06:21 am Title: Comical
This was a good chapter. I laughed so hard duringthe bad boy conversation, by doggy had to see what was up. oh, this is her review
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(translated that is - write more faster, my owner demands it)
9 [Report This]Date: February 27, 2007 06:48 pm Title: Painful
I really love the theme you put on each chapter. Nice touch!!
Date: February 26, 2007 01:48 pm Title: Uncomfortable
Wow -- what a nice surprise -- i just discovered a bunch of chapters to read & enjoy at once!! If only Karen would go away this easily -- you are much nicer to us than the show writers are!
8 [Report This]Date: February 25, 2007 07:08 pm Title: Distraction
So far, I'm super enjoying this story. I like how you relate the definitions to the story. I also like how the Jim/Pam conversations are realistic and not silly. It's realistic and I appreciate stories that stay true to the characters. So keep writing!
Date: February 22, 2007 07:22 am Title: Defiance
i love this. i think i started reading it on ff.net. anyway, i really love the definitions at the beginning and end. it is just awesome
Date: February 22, 2007 06:54 am Title: Defiance
I love this story... love it love it love it.
10 [Report This]Date: February 19, 2007 08:26 am Title: Awkward
Wow that was awesome..keep it up!!